Rhythm Of Her Beauty

Vibrant dreams flood her eyes

melting sun's heart upon first sight

Caramel skin worshiped by the wind

a poetry words cannot describe

Like wild roses, her love blossoms

a golden voice from the gods

the wild cannot rebel

until then

.....

wise old earth shall dance to the rhythms of her heart...  

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Oh it`s so great! Obviously you loved the photo and the girl, in order to write this amazing poem in lovely form and structure! I enjoyed...the music too, so calming...

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

Beautiful. Every word fits perfectly and describes the picture well.

[Natalie.]

I love the actual wording, but I'm not quite sure your rhythm quite fits the picture. To me this woman looks strong and thoughtful. You definitely hit the thoughtful part right on the head, but the strength in her character seems to have been circumvented.

[Tate Morgan]

Smitten is the word you are looking for and I would say I cab see why

[PoppySilver]

Excellent for the image love, you have done it much justice!
All passion and admiration here is encased with the hearts appreciation, beautiful work!
xx

[Rain (YouoweYoupay)]

Wow such a powerful song-like poem. You have delivered the desire to dance to wilderness, beauty, and the sun. Amazing write. Loved it.

-Wela.

[OT]

very nice!! some great phrasing here - the "caramel skin" and "earth shall dance to the rhythms of her heart" - nice!!

I love the chosen phrases you've written here. Very deep and very lovely!

[Tina Kline]

This is a very beautiful poem just like the young lady in the picture. And a really nice romantic tale in this as well.

[Lenard L. Banks III]

I like this poem it's short,sweet, deep and good.