Is it�

Is it�

A Poem by Your.in.my.heart

 

Is it right to push you away?
But want you by my side?
Is it normal to feel no pain?
But hurt inside?
Is it right to turn my back?
But want to see your face?
Is it normal to hate your principals?
But have those same standards?
Is it right to hate the man you are?
But love the man inside?
Is it normal to want my dad back?
 
 

© 2008 Your.in.my.heart


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wow, this was really good and i myself can really relate, i haven't seen my father for almost three years and haven't talked to him since april. i also just recently found out that he has a new girlfriend that he and my mother both failed to mention to my siblings or me and that he found the money to get out to LA from Virgina but not to see his kids. sometimes i don't want anything to do with him and sometimes i just want to sit and talk with him for hours about everything and nothing. its a complicated type of relationship.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This has to be difficult when you have this kind of relationship with your father. This is a very good write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the back-and-forth rhythm of ever other phrase, the tone of this piece and ultimately the ending which sums it up nicely.

Thanks for writing,
J.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh you have hit this one on the nail i have been here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It is horrible to go through all those emotions at once!!!!!!!!!!!! I give props to ya! great write my friend great one indeed!!!! KUDOS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, this was really good and i myself can really relate, i haven't seen my father for almost three years and haven't talked to him since april. i also just recently found out that he has a new girlfriend that he and my mother both failed to mention to my siblings or me and that he found the money to get out to LA from Virgina but not to see his kids. sometimes i don't want anything to do with him and sometimes i just want to sit and talk with him for hours about everything and nothing. its a complicated type of relationship.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 31, 2008

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