Four Steps To Reality

simultaneous realities determined by a single step

Four Steps Of Reality

standing before a great void.

a final decision has to be made,

without delay, deployed.

giving an answer that will reflect

a necessary choice,

vital and is an important convoy.

no hesitation or reluctance to avoid.

choose wisely, there is absolutely

no room for compromise,

regarding four unwritten lives.

multiverse co-existing with our own.

a parallel universe disperses.

on platform resembling a small plus,

a circle marks the middle,

this is a must.

a single step in any direction 

will seal a destiny.

and upon completion,

the remaining three

single steps will automatically delete,

will be there but unseen.

leaving no other option.

movement is confined and bound.

only one step is allowed.

choose one step to the right,

or one step to the left,

one step forward or

one step backward,

theses are the only factors.

a rite of passage does demand, 

and forcefully commands. 

calling for a single step into the unforeseen.

claiming a place in the stream life involving,

significant riddle of life cycles 

deserves a solving.

one step will reveal a parallel destiny,

simultaneously revolving,

around each other at the same time,

but in other dimensions.

caution will need to take the lead, 

being extremely careful as one proceeds,

different worlds and realities,

all happening as one step in either direction

determines a four step connection.

moving onward, this is how the flow of

time is driven in natural order.

an amazing endeavor in life.

one step forward, backward,

to the left or to the right.

certainty yearns to decide,

as risk and consequence abides,

despite the direction applied.

a journey will start and ignite

spiral staircase with pathway to follow.

will begin immediately,

take in a deep gulp and swallow.

an unknown and vast universal 

space awaits.

in-depth darkness that embarks, 

and engulfs.

a nothingness to be embraced,

an emptiness that will continue to 

exist until written in stone,

within this new place.

a dubious vineyard of time continuum,

with no limitation or minimum,

every living thing must ultimately face,

in this case, reference implies to the

human race,

taking a critical leap of faith,

each individual must take,

sealing their destiny and defining fate.

there is no going back or any escape.

parallel universe consumes the other

three realities of you and me,

sounds pretty crazy, indeed! 

co-existing in other dimensions,

mind-blowing thought,

an unbeliebte concept, expected,

hard to comprehend and believe.

some minds just cannot absorb 

or conceive.

disturbing and astonishing,

some of us do admonish.

keeping an open mind, ponder, wonder,

over these things and choose for 

yourselves.

Author's Note

Please view my prose poem. Open to comments and review.

Reviews

[EvaThornburn]

Interesting write kept me entertained from start to finish. I look forward to reading more of your poems, short stories, ect...Eva

[Bear]

Critique: (theses are the only factors) these
(on platform) a platform
(significant riddle of life cycles) a significant riddle - The noun phrase "significant riddle" is missing a determiner before it.
(spiral staircase with pathway to follow) with a pathway
(in-depth darkness that embarks) The in-depth - The noun phrase "significant riddle" is missing a determiner before it.
(a dubious vineyard of time continuum) of the time continuum
(an unbeliebte) unbelievable?

Review: I listened to this on a text to speech program because it confused me when I read it but listening to it everything flowed together and sounded deep, philosophical and sage-like. This is a poem that needs to be heard out loud to truly appreciate it, I hope you get the opportunity to read this at a group reading sometime. Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[samparks,sam]

yes nice to say every thing in this poem

[samparks,sam]

yes nice to say every thing in this poem

[zaisham9393]

I would say that this was thought provoking and perfectly written.I enjoyed reading this.thank you for sharing !

[samparks,sam]

you say every thing in poem I can understand