Broken

So aggravated...

Another crush ruined 

by another girl 

that I barely know. 

I told a guy 

that I like him.

And I got the 

Same answer 

That I always 

get:

"I only like

you as a 

friend..."

I can't tell you 

how many times

I've heard that.

The girl he likes,

yeah, I guess 

she's alright.

But, I've heard 

That she's cheated on boyfriends......

I hope he's careful......

Reviews

[ThIsDaRkRoAdToNoWhErE]

This is such an awesome piece!! I can pretty much relate, cause my ex had cheated on me. I did everything for her, and i mean everything that i could do. And when i found out what she did, pft, God, just no words or emotions could describe what i felt. Ugh, and the guy she's with now...Ugh, omg...that's another story right there lol. But i totally felt this tho, it was great. Great job with it! :)

[Lucien Maier]

the formatting is really well done. The words a well thought out, and exceptionally well placed.

[MoriartyMesa]

Part of me feels way old to read something like this, it draws the reader to a place of youth. And that is always an interesting effect.

[BLACK PRINCE]

nice poem that conveys those feelings
that we all had at some point of our life.
when you like somebody but they don't see you in the same way.

[Underestimated]

i hate when you like someone, and someone prettier than you gets the guy. so sad!
really good poem, really nice placement of the words. Your really awesome!!!

[Ragin Cajun]

Very good. I was a little confused about the structure. I did like the simplicity of it.

[Katrina Crago.]

Very Touching and True.
I loved it.

[Whiskurz]

I hate the friend word as well.....Great write.....Whisk

[AK]

Wow! Awesome poem! I totally love the flow and how you use simple words and yet make a poem so powerful. The ending was brilliant! Keep writing!

[Wandering Violet]

Nice! I like the broken lines structure, very effective.