Pain

Pain

A Poem by San Herman Lopez a.k.a. Sanzei
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I am in pain everyday... After a while it's best to just stay quite. No use in repeating myself. No need to worry and aggravate those around me... Just suck it up and keep moving.

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Every day I ache as soon as I awake. This pain I try and shake.

Oh why for goodness sake, do I live with this pain I hate?

So I ask can you relate.

 

I go insane every day in pain, how do I maintain.

My brain is clouded with cold misty rain. Oh pain!

 

I start with my lungs; several times my life has hung.

With out breath I sung with my shaking tongue.

How can I be so young and internally wrong?

 

I go insane every day in pain, how do I maintain.

My brain is clouded with cold misty rain. Why pain!

 

My eyes they burn as I try and learn.

Red they turn while the pain holds firm.

Why at my age, do my sight I have to earn?

 

I go insane every day in pain, how do I maintain.

My brain is clouded with cold misty rain. Pain! Pain!

 

My bones they ache, knees and knuckles make me hate.

When I move they crack and pop, under my weight.

All this pain within my joints! Can you relate?

 

I go insane every day in pain, how do I maintain.

My brain is clouded with cold misty rain. My pain...

 

Most of all my heart is hurt, after all these years, after all the work.

The pain makes me go insane when cold is the rain. This my pain.

How will my clouded brain ever maintain?


DAMN Pain!


-Sansee 12/31/12

© 2012 San Herman Lopez a.k.a. Sanzei


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My eyes they burn as I try and learn.
Red they turn while the pain holds firm.
My sight I will continue to try and earn let me be stern.

Kind alike saying my sight can go astray or it can keep it's focus, This is wonderful packed with truth well written....Kim



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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

San,
This is such an impressive poem. For some reason while reading it I was singing it with the same melody of "Suicide is Painless" for Marilyn Manson.

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San Herman Lopez a.k.a. Sanzei
San Herman Lopez a.k.a. Sanzei

Snoqualmie, WA



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Rhyming is what I love to do when I need to relax and or calm down... Rhyming is what makes me want to continue writing... I love to play with the words it is almost as if putting a painting together... more..

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