The Feast

Tonight we feast on the frail once again

And I’ll drag you down to the very end

Your screams shall silence our desires

Prepare to die and be devoured

 

Deep down this sepulchral soul

Holds contempt above you all

Demented lies and immolation

Now begins this desolation!

 

Murder are best behind closed doors

So what are we waiting for?

Symphonies of brutality!

F**k you all humanity!

Reviews

[Michael X]

Indeed, heavy tone where rage is seething fortitude. Feeling is forlorn
to oblivion, as in unapologetic to point of an apocalyptic state of mind.
No matter where life starts, we end up where we begin, and that
is trying to understand something beyond our grasp. Well written!

[Fréyjä Helvití]

Thank you Michael...Appreciate your thoughts on this... :)

[Ahmad Cox]

That really does sound like the lyrics to a heavy metal song.

[Chance]

I hear Litle Danzig or more Samhain.
***Rocker Sign***

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Oh wow what a powerful write... enjoyed this a lot. The vocabulary and descriptions full fill this poem so nicely.

[Fréyjä Helvití]

Thank you so much...

[GunMetal]

Brutal. This was way cool. The font you chose works well with the theme of this. Awesome.

[Fréyjä Helvití]

Thank you so much... :)

[Celestial Witch Child]

Revise "murders is best behind closed doors." It should be either "murders are best" or "murder is best." Intriguing piece. (:

[Fréyjä Helvití]

Oh... Forgot that one...It's actually murder is best behind closed doors...Anyways, thanks for pointing that out... :)

[nigrum homonculus]

damn! see what i love about this is that you don't specify what this could be about. vampires, cannibals hell it could be undead. really fed my imagination this did. well done.

[Fréyjä Helvití]

It does make things more interesting huh? You see, if I lay everything out for the readers, there won't be much questions asked. This way I get to play a little with imagination... Thank you...

[nigrum homonculus]

its very clever. i don't come across that much. no problem! i'm stealing this technique off you :)

[MoriartyMesa]

Well that sobered me up, like an upper cut.

[Fréyjä Helvití]

lol... Is that supposed to be a good thing?

[Dez H.]

Damn now that was some heavy s**t. "Murder is best behind closed doors." Im scared of you. I love it good s**t ms lady.

[Fréyjä Helvití]

Hope I didn't creep you out that much... But this is what I'm mostly about... Thank you