The invisible Strings

The invisible Strings

A Poem by Fréyjä Helvití

I trace the supernatural silhouette

Of your face shaped by my fantasies,

Where playful dalliances and duets,

Fostering beds of our destiny.

 

Your ethereal warmth divine

Emblazoning my crimsoned lips

Hearts and tongues ever entwined,

Fluttering amidst this rapturous kiss.

 

The silver lining upon our fingers,

Define the vows of these invisible strings,

For my days with you shall forever linger,

Along with the pain and joy it brings.


© 2013 Fréyjä Helvití



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this is a beautiful write so full of a poet's soul and deep meaning

Posted 3 Years Ago


Darkly beautiful.

I find this akin to what someone would say on their wedding day, most especially the last stanza. It's like personal vows written that acknowledge the beauty that can be found even in the darkest of things. I definitely see it in this piece.

-Caradoc

Posted 4 Years Ago


playful dalliances and duets - I love that line. There is something transparent - and sparkling about this poem. It was written with effervescent ink.
Beautiful

Posted 4 Years Ago


Fréyjä Helvití

4 Years Ago

Thank you :)
I love this. Its short , but has big impact because of how you use your words. Its beautiful and quite romantic. I can relate to this and it does touch me deeply.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Fréyjä Helvití

4 Years Ago

Thank you dear. :)
Now this is beautiful. Like dark sunshine.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Fréyjä Helvití

4 Years Ago

Thank you again... :)
This is more clear than polished glass on a spring morning with the sunshine coming down like rain.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Fréyjä Helvití

4 Years Ago

thank you...
Goodness. It is clear that you have a mastery of flow and melody. I have read your Bio and it is obvious that you are influenced by Poe (of whom I am an avid fan). Your two opening lines are amazing. Keep them coming Princess Helviti :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Fréyjä Helvití

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much dear... I'm glad to know a fellow fan of Poe. :)

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Fréyjä Helvití
Fréyjä Helvití

Rivendell, Middle Earth, Philippines



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