Farragos of illusion by artistic depression

Farragos of illusion by artistic depression

A Poem by Fréyjä Helvití

Frolicsome creatures upon grassy meadows
Creepish forlorn dead trees that bellows
Beyond the threshold and yonder the glen
Lies Elysian mysteries of time knows when

The illusive breeze of that bloodless May
Of raining twigs and prickling spray
Scars beneath my naked toes
To where I am, nobody knows

Blanched gore as Crimson wine
Underneath dampen gallows we dine
Clamoring rancid silver spoons
Of rampant riches that fade too soon

Nightmarish fantasies of dis figuration
Define me visions of my damnation
Hallucinations dived in melodies
Oh the dread that screams my symphonies

Juvenile harlequins and freakish jesters
Wicked suitors nor erotic splendors
Trappings of this carnal doom
Beneath scorched iron and dungeons gloom

Abyssal pits breathe hopeless cries
They pray for my own souls demise
Lessons that were never learned
Do you see me now? Do you see me burn?

Thundering fears, the deafening silence
Demented tortures, the emerging defiance
Chained amidst the beseeching light
Eternal absence at the dead of night

Ashes breath of fogs that loom
A forsaken bride, the remorseless groom
Denied to her twas one last chance
To take his groom for one last dance

Farragoes of my vast illusions
Memories confused far more delusions
If only I had learned to die
I wouldn't have taught myself to cry...

© 2013 Fréyjä Helvití



My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

you just blew my freaking mind,
thank you so much for this masterpiece
I TRULY look forward to reading you work.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Fréyjä Helvití

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much..
This poem is climatic and profound, great work.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Fréyjä Helvití

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much..
Nothing but pure art. Superbly done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


I love that last line! :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Great word choice haunting write love the way you put it all together in this storytelling write.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Fréyjä Helvití

4 Years Ago

Thank you... :)
Been quite some while since some one FORCED me to open a dictionary... Especially to seek out 'Gothic' vocabs. I bow to your talent and word power, though it has some awkward phrases. notwithstanding, it draws a perfect Gothic bleak picture of sadness and depression
the best I read today.
Going to my favorites

Posted 4 Years Ago


Fréyjä Helvití

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear... I am deeply flattered.
Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

4 Years Ago

Don't thank me... thank you for writing
SPELL BOUND............ beautifully crafted

Posted 4 Years Ago


Fréyjä Helvití

4 Years Ago

Thank you...
Really well written... Had a very antique beautiful careless kind of touch to this poignant story. Your word choice was brilliant and the flow and structure perfect. One of my favorites on the cafe~

Posted 4 Years Ago


Fréyjä Helvití

4 Years Ago

thank you dear...
wow......great one...
hey,if u don;t mind then can i''ve ask to u ...that how did u get the idea for this story....
i liked +loved + enjoyed + analysed=cheeered....it

Posted 4 Years Ago


Fréyjä Helvití

4 Years Ago

Everything just flowed. When you're inspired by something in any way, be it dark or beautiful, and y.. read more
Interesting poem, it has that dark emotion to it, love the 6th stanza "abyssal pits breathe hopeless cries"....anyway great job, loving your work...it truly is "dark and rainy"

Posted 4 Years Ago


Fréyjä Helvití

4 Years Ago

Oh thank you so much for the review.. :)

First Page first
Previous Page prev
1
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

2063 Views
41 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 6 Libraries
Added on June 6, 2012
Last Updated on March 30, 2013
Tags: Darkness, Gothic

Author

Fréyjä Helvití
Fréyjä Helvití

Rivendell, Middle Earth, Philippines



About
Is suffering from writer's block ______________________________________________ more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Miracle Miracle

A Poem by Akshat♥


Ashen Gray Ashen Gray

A Poem by Pax