Farewll Dark Angel

Sometimes Revenge is purer than Love!!

With her deliberate misdeeds

Or incandescent choices

That light too bright

That space too dark

All laughters stopped

When came along

Those anguished voices

Something exploded

Something scorched

And there she lay perturbed

Her existence lit in flames

Eyes wandering into chasm

Lips shivering in agony

Limbs amputated 

Soul tarnished Life burnt

That silence too quiet

The countenance too calm

That wait too long

For the beckoning noise

As she waited for him

Those flashbacks stumbled over

On what was left in her

As still as the universe

Was her farewell poise

She may not have made history

But for her many will moan

Yes, you will remember her

Long after she's gone

Then she heard the final knell

And she stood flagrant

Knocking on heaven's door

Recieved by the Satan

And all that she carried with her

Were her Crimes of Passion...

 

 

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is powerful work. There is always something that stirs up the spirit
when one witnesses another decide to live or die by their own hand.
This spirit was so sorrowful but heroic all the same. Visually stunning.

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank u so much for reading n reviewing it. Means a LOT :)

[Ashira Macy]

This was really great! Nice and dark, but this time it is by her own doing instead of someone else's misdeeds. Fallen angel indeed, she sure does sound like a bit of a demon. Great work on this, I loved how you formatted it too, it flowed so well.

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank u dear :) after all she had to accept falling for her misdeeds ;) keep reading n sendig ur valued reviews :)