God, It seemed easy.

You'll get it.

God,
You make it seem so easy
To take another life.
But,
Here I am with your knife In my hand.
Haunted by the chilling cold of others thoughts and fears.
God you make it seem so easy.
With your knife in my hands
And the vile creature you created at it's knees In front of me.
So disgusting.
So small. 
A perfect reflection of you my dear God.
And so, I'll take your knife.
And I'll end.
This. 
Life.

Reviews

[FateDictates]

clever and very cool..the layout, the sense of a menacing tone, those verses laying like jaggered lines, the blunt, short sentences..slam dunk..high five....loved it..

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

quite intense, nice picture, i loved this line:
"Haunted by the chilling cold of others thoughts and fears. "
nicely written

[silentpoet]

very dramatic and intense.I like it..

[London]

i agree with Gothicprincess17, Brilliant poem indeed

[WordNerd]

WOW brilliant poem =]

[Fontane Wong]

Sometimes, things seemed easy when others are doing, they did it just like brething or blinking, without any hesitating, they can do it easily. Things don't go that smooth and perfect in out hand though. Lots of fear and frightented thought would pause us from killing ourselves, life is rare, think triple before you do any decision Actually, if you think more deeply, you'll be regret to end up your life, there are things that you love and miss more than you think. Friendship, families, colleague... if you really kill yourself, I bet you would ask yourself tons of time about why to kill yourself, you will hate yourself so much why to stab the knife into your heart. Life is rare, if you end up this life, you wouldn't get another life, please enjoy and love every moment you spend in this life. A masterpiece piece.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Thoughts exressed here very rationally and truthfully. Great poem:)

[stars are far]

nice..
i loved the idea so much !!
good work