SHE'S GOT THE ANGEL IN HER HEART

Play on the Beatles song lyrics

SHE'S GOT THE ANGEL IN HER  HEART

The weather wept softly into the cloudy sky

As her glowing tentrils, curled up on the sly

Her pulsating pump, beat against his mighty chest

A cherry flavored cherub, an ivory seraph at best

Her honey tasting mouth folded onto his lips

Earthen tipped fingers, converged along her hips

His hands oh so eager, her wings stretched oh so wide

Their love was never timid, oh what a wondrous ride

Crystal silver moonbeams layed across their bed

Nirvana songs played softly inside her angelic head

He knew he'd gone to heaven, listening to her voice

Elysian Fields were calling, he didn't have a choice

Morning dew was glistening along the tattered sheets

She crept into the kitchen, and read a little Keats

He flew along side her, they sang an ambrosia tune 

She's got the angel in her heart that shines just like the moon

c2010 GBU 405 318P

    

Author's Note

for "Angels" contest deadline 4/5/10
@ OPEN VOTING DEADLINE IS 4/14TH MIDNIGHT

Reviews

[KL]

Oh the beauty that follows the earth-bound... always a pleasure to find the angel within, no matter where she goes or what she does. I think it's the last two lines that really pulls this one together for me though; it's a picture perfect end to an otherwise enchanting poem. Congratulations on winning, but that's not really the focus of this comment (or the poem for that matter). :)

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Beautifully written. Congrats on this winning poem!

[Legion]

Sweetly done.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

this is very good, the flow and imagery is great

[Satchmo's Gal]

wow. I kinda want this on my ipod...

[Emily]

this is beautiful. The flow is eretheral and absolutely catchy. You read the first few lines and you just want to plow through the rest of the peice grasping at every little detail and every pointed stanza. The english major in me doesn't like "Layed" in the third stanza. because the beams would lie there -- already fallen. But *shrugs* that is an english major thing.

Very nice work! THis is a wonderfully powerful piece.

[Ruth]

Great flow, draws you in:) Lovely imagery xx

[Dane Osborne]

Oh this was cool. I realy dug this. You have a great way with words and I loved the flow. I enjoyed the theme of a love affair between an angel and a human, the divine and the forbidden in one. Great write:)