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PRISTINE PRISON

PRISTINE PRISON

A Poem by GBU POETRY ONLY
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Only one if you must CONTEST ONLY A ONE LINER POEM

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PRISTINE PRISON

Alas the screen door flew open, ending her pristine prison of solitude. 

c2010 GBU 422 351P

© 2011 GBU POETRY ONLY



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i like how this poem is vivid, and it is a thought-provoking line. you want to know about who she is. i am also a fan of alliteration.

Posted 5 Years Ago


cleverly done.... a sentence that takes the reader to an array of possibilities x

Posted 5 Years Ago


Very intriguing line, and powerful too. Love the picture, it went well with it. Made the line all the more beautiful and powerful

Posted 7 Years Ago


Beautiful and ever so descriptive for a single line.
Now I just sit here and wonder where she is going, and why the prison was pristine.
~Calypso Firebutton

Posted 7 Years Ago


Photo and the one line made a powerful poem. You have talent. Thank you for this outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago



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