CAN'T COMPREHEND, EYE

CAN'T COMPREHEND, EYE

A Poem by GBU POETRY ONLY
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The tireless mind in front of a computer isn't one of my virtues.

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CAN'T COMPREHEND, EYE

Crazy lumps of soltitude brings on the lazy eye
Always wishing the light won't seer into the hurricane's eye
Never ending blinks shield the light from my eyes
Terrorizing my impish smile to hide and seek without eyes

Cordially wanting Superman' everlasting xray vision eyes
Overlapping my wish to sleep longer than the blink of an eye
Mindless lashes fuse as the sleepy sleeps fill up my eyes
Precious moments isn't a choice of my whimpering mind's eye
Reminiscing those long nightly hours like a punch in the eye
Erasing those vicious lies that jut into my black and blue eyes
Harassing magic that creeps into my mindless eradicated eye 
Elbowing the words that leap off the page into dry pink eye
Needless nothingness ignites the fire of a cats nineth eye
Dominating heads poke poison pens into whites of my eyes

Eerie phrases envelope my polka-dot eye
Yearning to trip and blind a focused eye
Easily infusing ghostly pieces into my black-eyed pea eyes

c2011 LLR

© 2011 GBU POETRY ONLY



Author's Note

GBU POETRY ONLY
See what happens when a tired brain fixates on an eye for an eye...


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"Mindless lashes fuse as the sleepy sleeps fill up my eyes
Precious moments isn't a choice of my whimpering mind's eye
Reminiscing those long nightly hours like a punch in the eye
Erasing those vicious lies that jut into my black and blue eyes"

This is an ode to an eye, I'm guessing? Either way, this poem has such emotion in it, it can't be explained. I can feel the vibrancy of your words trying to cut through and its amazing how it forms into this imagery we can't imagine.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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"Mindless lashes fuse as the sleepy sleeps fill up my eyes
Precious moments isn't a choice of my whimpering mind's eye
Reminiscing those long nightly hours like a punch in the eye
Erasing those vicious lies that jut into my black and blue eyes"

This is an ode to an eye, I'm guessing? Either way, this poem has such emotion in it, it can't be explained. I can feel the vibrancy of your words trying to cut through and its amazing how it forms into this imagery we can't imagine.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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