BETTER TIMES

BETTER TIMES

A Poem by GBU POETRY ONLY
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Acrostic poetry

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BETTER TIMES

Be it soul searching, don't deny who you really are & enjoy the ride
Even though the day is 1440 seconds, we all need the hours to laugh out loud
Toss up your cares to the wind and then you'll feel free for more than a second
Try to see that mankind is a human trait we all try to live up, so seek kindness
Ease into life and make your style live on and not fade away in the face of adversity 
Remember we all occupy the surface and sticking together can planetize us  

Times are tough but living through the pain makes us stronger than the World Atlas
Irrigate your thoughts and stand proud of what the written word can accomplish
Measure not how much you're worth, just know your weight is precious & golden 
Equalize your anger with the thought that only being human is an adventure
Synchronize our voices & say things will be good and better times will arise from the dust 

GBU c2011

© 2011 GBU POETRY ONLY



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Beautiful poem. In this piece you spoke wonderful words of wisdom. Great job on this poem. I admire you for writing it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Good acrostic poetry ^_^
I would give a more detail indepth review but there's not much to add but praise for this work of poetry you've created here... To give advice and moral stability as messages found throughout this poem is what really makes this poem a piece of excellence in my own opinion. Possibly the only constructive thing I could state is that the phrase which is used as the bone structure for the acrostic poem was a bit flawed due to the use of the word "Times" because of the letter "I"'s linear like presence among other letters full in content... possibly a good alternative for the word would've been "Days", but that's only assumption...
Overall: 94/100, truly adored this work, great job and hope to see more from you :)


Posted 5 Years Ago


Wonderful uplifting poem with a fantastic message, great stuff x

Posted 5 Years Ago


We must always be proud of who we are and disregard what life throws at us. Living life and those moments are precious. Beautiful poem. Thank you for this.

Posted 5 Years Ago


cool write,
wise words of inspiration!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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