BETTER TIMES

Acrostic poetry

BETTER TIMES

Be it soul searching, don't deny who you really are & enjoy the ride

Even though the day is 1440 seconds, we all need the hours to laugh out loud

Toss up your cares to the wind and then you'll feel free for more than a second

Try to see that mankind is a human trait we all try to live up, so seek kindness

Ease into life and make your style live on and not fade away in the face of adversity 

Remember we all occupy the surface and sticking together can planetize us  

Times are tough but living through the pain makes us stronger than the World Atlas

Irrigate your thoughts and stand proud of what the written word can accomplish

Measure not how much you're worth, just know your weight is precious & golden 

Equalize your anger with the thought that only being human is an adventure

Synchronize our voices & say things will be good and better times will arise from the dust 

GBU c2011

Reviews

[Dove]

Beautiful poem. In this piece you spoke wonderful words of wisdom. Great job on this poem. I admire you for writing it.

Good acrostic poetry ^_^
I would give a more detail indepth review but there's not much to add but praise for this work of poetry you've created here... To give advice and moral stability as messages found throughout this poem is what really makes this poem a piece of excellence in my own opinion. Possibly the only constructive thing I could state is that the phrase which is used as the bone structure for the acrostic poem was a bit flawed due to the use of the word "Times" because of the letter "I"'s linear like presence among other letters full in content... possibly a good alternative for the word would've been "Days", but that's only assumption...
Overall: 94/100, truly adored this work, great job and hope to see more from you :)

[LinBin]

Wonderful uplifting poem with a fantastic message, great stuff x

[Dahlia Phoenix]

We must always be proud of who we are and disregard what life throws at us. Living life and those moments are precious. Beautiful poem. Thank you for this.

[roy mccarthy]

cool write,
wise words of inspiration!