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HONESTY VS CRUELTY

HONESTY VS CRUELTY

A Poem by GBU POETRY ONLY
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acrostic poetry

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Honing your daggers into someone's poetic license
Ostentatious reveals your black serpent's tongue
Negative advice conceals your abated truth
Easily turning off the desire to listen and learn
Strutting knowledge and pointing out only faults
Tosses you into the wallowing misguided bin while
Yellow flags fly over your malignant terse words   

Voicing unkind feedback doesn't assist mankind
Striking your pierced tongue isn't helpful, you will find 

Constructive criticism is a far better tool 
Risking helpful tips, is far better than eating gruel
Universally, a slap on the back is better than a slap in the face
Eventually you will harden and crash into the human base
Listen now because your malice can't hide behind 'honesty' forever
Take a tip from me, your scarring words are not so clever
Yes, be honest but show your elegance by constructing not constricting

c2011 GBU

© 2011 GBU POETRY ONLY



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Added on December 3, 2011
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