Forest of dreams

Trees made of glass

Grass a sapphire blue

The moon a vibrant yellow

Butterfly’s ablaze with fire

The moon turned blood red

A scythe to my head

The ground now a beautiful violet 

Reviews

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Trees made of glass
ME: OOOOH HOW PWETTY!!!!

Grass a sapphire blue
ME: WHERE?????

The moon a vibrant yellow
ME: I guess its a little yellow, here...waaaah it sounds so beautiful!!!!!!

Butterfly’s ablaze with fire
ME: I LOVE BUTTERFLIES!!!!!!! *attempts to fly off chair* No....

The moon turned blood red
ME: *gasps madly* O.O A TWIST????

A scythe to my head
ME: That's not my scyhte is it?? *turns around to see shiny scythe still behind me* WHO THE FUDGE IS THAT??????

The ground now a beautiful violet
ME: O.O.....THAT WAS CREEPY COOL!!!!! WOOT WOOT! AWESOME MAN!!!!!! :3

[Rika]

Rolf!

[Chesney W.]

'Trees made of glass
grass a sapphire blue'
wonderful imagery. and how the moon turns from yellow to blood red, and the ground turning to violet, a twist on the already amazing write. thank you for posting such a poem. very enlightening to read.
-Chesney Chey(:

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Love the last line, think it made it :)

[Rika]

Thanks!

[MRIDUL MITTAL]

epicly composed

[Rika]

Thanks!

[Vivek Singh]

good to picturize it.......

[Rika]

Thanks man!

[Bluefire]

Love it!

[Falling Leaf.]

A peculiar but beautiful story. Very nice.

SG Howe

[Ella]

Oh this is so pretty! :) paints a lovely picture

[Steven Cash]

Nice, could be called 'All Living Colors' as well

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Wow, I can just imagine the beauty in this short, yet wonderful poem. I love it! ^_^ tho, when you talked about the moon and a scythe, I reminded me of a anime show I love, but I can't remember what its called... Argh, darn, I forgot >_< lol
The ending was the most beautiful, but my most favorite line was " Butterfly’s ablaze with fire" just beautiful! :D
Fantastic work!
Thanks for sharing!
100/100

[Rika]

Could it be soul eater?

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Yes!!!!

[Rika]

I Win!!!!

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yeah, you won :P lol