Fear

Long narrow hall

 

Lights a flicker

 

Not alone

 

Stalking eyes

 

Began to panic

 

Shadows grab

 

Floor stained red

 

Now in bed

 

Finally safe and sound 

 

 

 

Reviews

[MandaBear]

This was a scary poem but it was also very mysterious. First you start out running away from something and you think you are safe when you are home in your bed but that might not be the case. This reminds me of scary movies this is how most of them are. You start out okay but the more and more you go into the story the more and more unsafe you are. Great Job with this. Keep up the great work.

[Chesney W.]

nice!! short, but I like this alot!! keep up the good work!!
-Chesney Chey (:

[glasswindow]

Nice, Short simple and holds a certain elegance to it that only comes with simplicity.

[Rika]

Thanks so much!!!!

[Irishbabies]

wow very nicely written I LOVE IT!!!:)

[Bluefire]

A true nightmare. I love it!

[Dominique]

This is very neat. I like the ending.

[Ella]

Oh my gosh, I love this whole thing! It is amazing! Short but sweet :) you're an amazing writer, can't wait to see more! :)

[Bumble]

This is a cute poem!

[Steven Cash]

oooooh love that ending

and like Rachel said, that'd be a great beginning to Paranormal Activity 4, or Saw or something

[deepblue04]

wow, interesting. Good job!

[RachelReaper]

what a nightmare scene! Seems like it could be a type of hellish opening to a horror flick