Stained black

Stained black

A Poem by Rika

Wings black as night

Heart cold as snow

He won’t protect you

He’ll only deceive you 

Once a warrior of light

Now a soldier of dark

The most evil creature I know

The one whom I despise

My angel

© 2012 Rika


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Honestly, I LOVE this!! I don't know what else to say, it's just good. For the most part I don't do sappy poems and this is the first of my kind I've seen on this site. It reminds me of one I just posted I'd like you to check out it's called The One.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wow. So good. Its so good I am not sure I have the right words for how awesome this is. Great job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

not to be rude but OH MY JESUS THIS IS SO GREAT SO MOVING SO REALISTIC cough cough i LOVED it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oooooh! I like this. :) Great job, I love how you wrote it!! ^_^

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Even though it's short, it's very descriptive and the vision is so vivid to me.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really love this one(:

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it sounds like the devil when he first fell from heaven good peace

Posted 10 Years Ago


The twist and turn of the poem is unexpected but nonetheless great poem

Posted 10 Years Ago


Brilliant! X3

Posted 10 Years Ago


Love it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dude this is short yet descriptive and simple.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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