At Times

At Times

A Poem by G.W. Saitreux
"

something

"
believe in nothing
believe in something

believe in everything
believe in something

at certain scales
proportional,
told are tales

what has been
what will be
what remains

something

- G.W. Saitreux

© 2018 G.W. Saitreux



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G.W. Saitreux
Any and all feedback welcome!

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Does nothingness really exist? That was my takeaway after reading this. I'm having a very weird day if I'm honest so I hope you don't mind, but I might just lose my mind right here right now. Or not, but that would be something.

Everything and nothing and all else in between is something. It's a beautiful metaphysical statement that you make here, or at least that's what I'm reading. If I'm off, don't mind me, I might be having a bad day, but that's something too I guess.

Something. What if I left this review blank right now and didn't write a word, would that be something? Wouldn't it? Ok so I'm going off the deep end, I think I've had it. Sorry, but it's something I guess.

Seriously, good poem. Head-scratcher for sure, but something to think about, to be consumed by. Thanks for sharing this!

Hailey



Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

G.W. Saitreux

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks for reading! You're right on point with the statement I was making just don't overthink it
Thoughts In Time

2 Weeks Ago

Something is everything and nothing in one🦋



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I loved this, so simple but at the same time so effective! It really makes you think and I love the repetition of 'something' as it is opens up a variety of different interpretations, nice job!

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

G.W. Saitreux

6 Days Ago

Thanks for reading, I'm glad you loved it!
I really like this write, made me think. Awesome writing

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

G.W. Saitreux

1 Week Ago

Thanks again for your kind words!
My review will be much shorter than the previous one you received.
I liked your poem.
And of course northingness exist at least to a degree.
Example if you believe in nothing and have no opinions then nothing is something

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

G.W. Saitreux

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it
Elegantly presented and certainly thought provoking. I like a few words used well, such writing - using nouns and verbs to do the heavy lifting, elevates those few words, increases their worth and the worth of all words. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

G.W. Saitreux

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks for your review! I appreciate poems with few words that convey meaning effectively so I attem.. read more
I’m just laughing, so true you hit the nail on the head - makes me smile, excellent so true🌹love it agree 100percent🌹

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

G.W. Saitreux

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks for the review! I'm happy this poem caused a smile(:
Thoughts In Time

2 Weeks Ago

🦋🌈🌹❤️🌈🌸🌼💖🦋
Does nothingness really exist? That was my takeaway after reading this. I'm having a very weird day if I'm honest so I hope you don't mind, but I might just lose my mind right here right now. Or not, but that would be something.

Everything and nothing and all else in between is something. It's a beautiful metaphysical statement that you make here, or at least that's what I'm reading. If I'm off, don't mind me, I might be having a bad day, but that's something too I guess.

Something. What if I left this review blank right now and didn't write a word, would that be something? Wouldn't it? Ok so I'm going off the deep end, I think I've had it. Sorry, but it's something I guess.

Seriously, good poem. Head-scratcher for sure, but something to think about, to be consumed by. Thanks for sharing this!

Hailey



Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

G.W. Saitreux

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks for reading! You're right on point with the statement I was making just don't overthink it
Thoughts In Time

2 Weeks Ago

Something is everything and nothing in one🦋

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Added on February 3, 2018
Last Updated on February 7, 2018
Tags: poem, direction, thought, knowledge, back-and-forth, memories, moments, lack-of-knowledge, creation, universe, time, love, lyric


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