Unglued

Unglued

A Poem by Gaia Octavia

Mistrust,
unjust,
you must
intrude

You've won,
I'm done,
I've come
unglued

© 2016 Gaia Octavia


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The beginning of the end, is when you realised that the end had begun so very long ago. Your words speak, shout and scream volumes.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Gaia Octavia

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much!
Lorry

7 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
Wonderful in its simplicity. But still very raw. I love this!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Gaia Octavia

7 Years Ago

Genuinely, thank you very much!
To get to that point is to reach a point of no return, so to speak. This speaks that language flawlessly; brief, but packing the punch to last. Solid work, my friend. Genuinely solid. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Gaia Octavia

7 Years Ago

Indeed it is. Thank you for understanding so flawlessly and for your kind review ☺
Asante

7 Years Ago

My pleasure, my pleasure. :)

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Added on October 18, 2016
Last Updated on October 18, 2016
Tags: Poetry, solitude, life isolation, giving up

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