Up and Down Stairs

Up and Down Stairs

A Poem by GalaxyGhost

Daunting, first step up.
Run, trip, sweat, out of breath--death?
Nah, just out of shape.

© 2016 GalaxyGhost


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Lol, I totally can relate to this!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

GalaxyGhost

7 Years Ago

Yeah, based off of my high school where the stairs were horrible. At least my college has elevators.
This is pretty good I'll give it a 10,too bad the grades are up to a 100.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

GalaxyGhost

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Fantastic!!!
Thankfully its just 'out of shape.'

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

GalaxyGhost

7 Years Ago

Well, thank you so much!
This is great. I can relate. I work out but stairs are always a beast.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

GalaxyGhost

7 Years Ago

Yup, especially at my high school--the stairs were the worst: three flights of them.
I'm out of shape I feel I need to get into shape though.



Posted 7 Years Ago


GalaxyGhost

7 Years Ago

Same here. Thanks for reading this poem!
I can relate to this. When I walk/run down or up the stairs, I will get so tired. Sometimes, I have to sit down on the steps, to rest my legs.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

GalaxyGhost

7 Years Ago

Well, thank you! Stairs can be tiring.
kenya smith

7 Years Ago

Welcome :)

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