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A Poem by Celestial Witch Child

A heavy weight champ battling the hours
Numbers pirouetting by on the flickering screen
A convoluted amphetamine parade 
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 repeat
Mind and body stalls, skips, rises, falls
When was the last time you slept?
Take another shot and cuddle up to your apathy
One more sunrise to force through your gullet
White noise screaming in your skull
A few too many bats in the belfry
Starve your body and feed your vices
1 2 3 repeat 1 2 3 repeat
Whirring, popping, crackling
Repeat
Repeat
Repeat

© 2015 Celestial Witch Child


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I really like how its written! Very well penned, and am keen to creep around on your profile to read more of your stuff! I really like your writing style :)

This may be a bad interpretation, or maybe even an obvious one, but I think this is about our constant need to breathe to live. And were doing nothing really, but existing.

I really enjoyed this :)
Never stop.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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i really enjoyed this work of brilliant art

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wow Wow its just so good i literally have to kept re reading this ''white noise screaming in your skull''
perfect!! keep up the writing its soo good

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Celestial Witch Child

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
AH! This is awesome, literally feel like I've snapped just by reading.
The line "Take another shot and cuddle up to your apathy" is very strong.
Very emotion evoking. Keep it up!
QR.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Celestial Witch Child

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
I really like how its written! Very well penned, and am keen to creep around on your profile to read more of your stuff! I really like your writing style :)

This may be a bad interpretation, or maybe even an obvious one, but I think this is about our constant need to breathe to live. And were doing nothing really, but existing.

I really enjoyed this :)
Never stop.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

On occasion it suddenly occurs to us that its not all random.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Umm...............what is it about?

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sounds like the palooka that keeps coming back to be champ, but it is never meant to be. Same as life sometimes. Nice writing and I like it very much. Thanks.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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