Here Comes the Sun

Here Comes the Sun

A Poem by Celestial Witch Child
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Tribute to the Beatles.

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Radical thinking in a desperate world
Visions of peace fueled by opioid fervor
Beautiful dreams to change the thinking of millions
Hope harmonizing to the strums of an acoustic guitar
The story of the lyrics entrance- dancing into the minds of those with unlimited potential
Singing blackbirds who will forever alter the world, flying with broken wings

© 2012 Celestial Witch Child


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My only complaint is the crushing feeling I get when reading this. It's so short, I need to read more. It's great. I feel you might want to expand it? Maybe try adding the other perspective of the spectrum, like the desperation of the world, the dreams of the populace, and the wings all aflutter. It's really quite magnificent. Short and sweet.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I have a tattoo that this poem reminds me of. I'm torn, I both like how it's condensed into 6 lines yet I want more from it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I salute you and the beatles :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice and well written! I love it, you use great words too :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My only complaint is the crushing feeling I get when reading this. It's so short, I need to read more. It's great. I feel you might want to expand it? Maybe try adding the other perspective of the spectrum, like the desperation of the world, the dreams of the populace, and the wings all aflutter. It's really quite magnificent. Short and sweet.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 28, 2012
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