Xavier's Story

How my alter ego was created.

So, Xavier was created when his father sold him to the military at age 10 for a "Experiment" on creating a weapon that is purely human, looks harmless, but is deadly. He was tortured to the core, in an attempt to "break a humans sanity and unleash the true power we never use" 

After that failed, he was locked in a room by himself for 4 years, nobody speaking to him at all, he began to talk to the walls, begging to be let out, but at the 4th year, He just sat there, staring at the camera, not even blinking, 

it wasn't until he stood completely still that someone sent in a prisoner of war to "test" the results..Xavier didn't even notice he was there, he just stared at the camera, When the team went to sleep, and the lights cut off, Xavier literally ripped the prisoners ears off, tied him up and cut his body while staring directly into his eyes, The prisoner was crying by the time the team came back, but Xavier just sat in the same place, staring at the camera while the prisoner sat in the corner, tied up, crying, 

On the walls, in blood, was written "Daddy, I want to play." 

Xavier ended up killing the prisoner, and was taken out of the room for his final test, For 2 years, Xavier was genetically modified and tortured to prove or disprove the theory of insanity leading to..well you know, The test failed, And Xavier was thought to be dead, he was sent back home to his father, in his mansion, his father realized his mistake, and placed the casket in the basement.

 Xavier was still alive, one day. the mother was out of town for a few days, The father decides to cheat on her, Xavier walks in on him cheating unnoticed, As the women leaves, Xavier appears behind his father with a pair of scissors in his right hand, he quietly says "Loyalty...And trust...two things that never last forever, sometimes it lasts lifetimes, sometimes it lasts seconds, but it is always broken...wouldn't you agree, father?" As he stares at him, expressionless, playing with the scissors, 

His father knew what Xavier wants to do, and he says "Xavier..Please...I made you...don't do this." Xavier, Still expressionless, says "You did not make me...you caused me." before using the scissors to scalp him, and then hang him from the ceiling. Xavier goes mad, and with his rage, he accidentally kills his mother once she finds out he killed dad...Xavier goes into a deep depression and seals himself in the main room of the mansion, in a closed casket, only to be recovered 20 as the mansion gets investigated by police...

"12 policeman found dead for unknown reasons, but investigators suspect that some sort of large animal tore them to shreds in a fit of rage, we will have more on this story, as it develops."

Author's Note

Ignore grammar errors please.

Reviews

[Charlotte e.e. Griffith..]

This is the best thing that I have ever read in my life. Literally.

[Rana]

Although purely fictionally, the veil has finally been lifted off the mystery of Xavier's creation; i did use to wonder. This was like overwhelmingly enthralling. Blood and kills and mutilation and corpse. Captivating is the word.

[Siwu]

This was quite thrilling. It scares me a bit. It was very well written, you were able to capture the horror. Well done, well done.

Thanks for giving me a nightmare.

[BloodApocalypse]

This is pretty scary! good job:)

[Malister Mikey]

Oh it is like a news report sort of thing I really like that, this is a rather interesting piece of course I will be skipping the grammar issues as you have asked. There is no mystery in this piece and everything is said plainly though that is not necessarily a bad thing as a writer that is your choice.

The ending made it sound like a news bulletin thing and I found that pretty cool, since I don't normally stumble across such things. I suggest adding details on the types of tortures ( unless that is being saved for later) I did enjoy the read it was well done.

Sincerely, Malister Mikey

[blondie45]

Really spooky. I love it. :)