Your Life Is My Eclipse

Your Life Is My Eclipse

A Poem by Gary McDonald
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A woman whose beauty has ruined all potential love interests, eternally.

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Your eyes are a hundred savage wolves
with my heart the blood soaked steak at their feet
and if angels could sing and their voice be heard
they would be silenced by your every word
for I have felt your beauty, and so I know
that all I see, shall never be
these Angels and their wolves of yours.

© 2009 Gary McDonald



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Short, to the point, and full of emotion. I liked it/

Posted 3 Years Ago


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this feels so definitive...not debatable....compressed conviction..I like it a lot

Posted 7 Years Ago


So different from the previous one I read .. this is raw, modern wording .. powerful and yet poetic ..

' .. Your eyes are a hundred savage wolves with my heart the blood soaked steak at their feet and if angels could sing .. '

What a picture that excerpt makes .. thick painted and strong colours!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Raw, sad..
Nicely done, Gary!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


great job..:) images that your poems delivers is really good.. this one really touched the strings of my heart... keep writing!!!!!!!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on December 27, 2009
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Tags: love, angel, eyes, beauty, blood, sing

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Gary McDonald
Gary McDonald

Crawley, West-Sussex, United Kingdom



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Do not love for the love of another, nor seek the sights already sought, live for the lives of the many, and your days will in time be taught. Gary I'll be swinging in from time to time, but.. more..

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