Your Life Is My Eclipse

A woman whose beauty has ruined all potential love interests, eternally.

Your eyes are a hundred savage wolves
with my heart the blood soaked steak at their feet
and if angels could sing and their voice be heard
they would be silenced by your every word
for I have felt your beauty, and so I know
that all I see, shall never be
these Angels and their wolves of yours.

Reviews

[Shawnee Rose]

Short, to the point, and full of emotion. I liked it/

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this feels so definitive...not debatable....compressed conviction..I like it a lot

[emmajoy]

So different from the previous one I read .. this is raw, modern wording .. powerful and yet poetic ..

' .. Your eyes are a hundred savage wolves with my heart the blood soaked steak at their feet and if angels could sing .. '

What a picture that excerpt makes .. thick painted and strong colours!

[cest la vie]

Raw, sad..
Nicely done, Gary!!

[mystic soul]

great job..:) images that your poems delivers is really good.. this one really touched the strings of my heart... keep writing!!!!!!!!!