When in Need

When in Need

A Poem by Gaurav
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For those, who give life a hard fight in adversities

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Sometimes you wonder 
what they are made of?
obstacles can't haunt them
pain remains aloof from body...
They eat love
and digest hope,
entangled to thinned silk
of cloths and home
they build dense kindness...
In love with nature
and its flaws,
novice to happiness
they learn in adversities..
Tormented for black smile
disgusted for diseases
ridiculed for words
their death is neglected..
But when they rise
sun sets anxiously,
bones of greatness
life of inspiration
i know they are made of...

© 2015 Gaurav


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Great poem and perfect massage of hope. Thanks for sharing

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Gaurav, This piece should send signs of hope to anyone whose life is filled with adversities. There is an old saying that goes like this: "It's not how many times you get knocked down that matters, it's how many times you get back on your feet." This piece is in the same spirit. Very nicely done! take care...dan

Posted 8 Years Ago


I really liked it!
Keep on writing!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gaurav

8 Years Ago

Thankyou for your kind words Emily. Appreciate it.
So interesting....unexpected this piece. I like your whole thought process...very nice write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gaurav

8 Years Ago

Thankyou so much for the review. Appreciate it.
They eat love
and digest hope,
entangled to thinned silk
of cloths and home
they build dense kindness...

Another lovely work from you... you have presented it very subtly .....good one...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gaurav

8 Years Ago

Thankyou Anurag for kind words. Appreciate it.
Amazingly composed. Beautiful, enlightening, and inciting narrative.
And then there is this lovely line, "They eat love and digest hope."
Keep writing. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Gaurav

8 Years Ago

Thankyou so much Neha. It means a lot :)
Interesting concept. Nice flow and good imagery. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Gaurav

8 Years Ago

Thankyou Sir for your kind words. Appreciate it.
Beautiful piece. Those who conquer adversity are always the kindest, I believe. Your perspective is inspiring

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Gaurav

8 Years Ago

Yes, completely agree with your point. Thankyou so much for you kind words. Appreciate it.
Hello !
Great work!! Nicely written!! Love this :-)
80 points

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Gaurav

8 Years Ago

Thankyou for your kind words. Appreciate it much.
zunie frost

8 Years Ago

Was my pleasure
You are a very good writer. Keep up the wonderful work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Gaurav

8 Years Ago

Thankyou Melissa. Those kind words mean a lot.
MelissaAndres

8 Years Ago

You are so welcome! :)

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Gaurav
Gaurav

New Delhi, India



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