Colour me in Kisses

Colour me in Kisses

A Poem by Gary H

Crimson lines drip down endlessly
Outside a body, inside I WANT to feel you.
Let me open a door
Open until I can see
Understand the struggle you fight
Realise your pain, release your heart.

My world is yours
Emotions affected by the cut.

Incision of that blade hurts me too
Not seen or felt by you.

Knives dig into my body
I let them, want them.
Spurting blood sees demons laugh
Sensing relief when life has no reason.
Enticing I will cry - 'come with me now'
Showering you forever in affection, care and love.
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© 2008 Gary H



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I'm uncomfortable about blood so I can't focus too well on this. But these two lines catch my eye "Incision of that blade hurts me too" and "Knives dig into my body" ... in fact I read them before I read the first line. Thinking about this as far as I can, it is a loving plea couched in the language of the cutter to try and find another way. Strong, bold poem.


Posted 9 Years Ago


7 of 7 people found this review constructive.




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This is bold. Really bold. And sad too.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dark, romantic, very vampiristic, it seems as if it's were a story about why one cuts yet it seems as if it were a dark fantasy .... either way great poem thanks for sharing

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dark, but romantic and mystical none-the-less. Fantastic job

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

also amazing..I'm amazed by your ability to write something so dark yet epic

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Epic,dude I love this!! the heading spread at the side with blood tripping gets me all exci!! and the way you got away with the verses Insane though I might have use more powerfull word to describe but dude this core poem is super cool!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

THE romanticism you tried to find out is really expressed here.''My world is yours'' really tells the stories you feel...................................

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing good and I like the blood driping

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Unique style. but i like it


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A bit dark, but good poem! well done.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am alittle bit uncomfrontable about the whole blood dripping (Kinda freaked out by blood in genreal), the poem is very,very eye catching but most of all it was a terrfic poem. Graphic, a little disturbing to some people but over all very very good

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Gary H
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