Colour me in Kisses

Crimson lines drip down endlessly
Outside a body, inside I WANT to feel you.
Let me open a door
Open until I can see
Understand the struggle you fight
Realise your pain, release your heart.

My world is yours
Emotions affected by the cut.

Incision of that blade hurts me too
Not seen or felt by you.

Knives dig into my body
I let them, want them.
Spurting blood sees demons laugh
Sensing relief when life has no reason.
Enticing I will cry - 'come with me now'
Showering you forever in affection, care and love.

Reviews

[Orlando Furioso]

I'm uncomfortable about blood so I can't focus too well on this. But these two lines catch my eye "Incision of that blade hurts me too" and "Knives dig into my body" ... in fact I read them before I read the first line. Thinking about this as far as I can, it is a loving plea couched in the language of the cutter to try and find another way. Strong, bold poem.

[Rahman Bin Taleb]

THE romanticism you tried to find out is really expressed here.''My world is yours'' really tells the stories you feel...................................

[Skily]

Amazing good and I like the blood driping

[Sir Jaykom]

Unique style. but i like it

[Wolfhilde]

A bit dark, but good poem! well done.

[Toasty (Erin)]

I am alittle bit uncomfrontable about the whole blood dripping (Kinda freaked out by blood in genreal), the poem is very,very eye catching but most of all it was a terrfic poem. Graphic, a little disturbing to some people but over all very very good

[TheAppealingPoet]

i really enjoy this poem, its very descriptive as if i could see what was going on with my own eyes, i also appreciate your creativity in making the title a acyronym for every line in your poem..

[Jake Erkens]

its a good write, though for me the flow isnt good, its rugged. the subject, however is nevertheless excellent and it never gets boring reading one of these.
the sturcture of this poem is well done, love the dripping blood mate!

cheers :)x

[dreaming dame]

beautifully done,I really enjyed it :]

[Vampire Shadow]

This looks like something i would right... but you just make it ten times better!!!
This poem is awesome, good job...

[Lilly]

Amazing imagery with this. There is such deep and potent emotion in this piece. You have created a fantastic and very beautiful acrostic poem here.