The World Will Grow Old In One Single Night

A song-like poem inspired by the many captivating beliefs of the Fae.

He wandered alone to the forest one night,
following a tune that was strange to hear,
when he came across a girl with a shimmering light,
which seems to grow distant as he grew near.
The forest was alive with the fragrance of spring,
But winter was everywhere, clear to see.
The moon shone bright, and a creature besieged
Beckoned me closer and said to me:
A clearing close in the forest you'll find,
A fabulous banquet of faerie kind,
Just close your eyes and surrender your mind,
And soon, be at peace in the arms of our kind.

Come, dance and sing, come with the wild fae-
You won't want to leave and forever you'll stay.
Join in our song, and get caught in our dance,
Once you begin you'll be lost in a trace,
Give yourself now, while the vision is bright,
And the world will grow old in one single night.

Reviews

[JR Darewood]

You have a great sense of rhythm, your rhyms are effortless and natural, and a perfect complement to a poem about a faerie dance. I love the old stories and legends, and I'm glad that you're here keeping them alive with your retelling, your ending was a perfect summation: "And the world will grow old in one single night" Loved it.

[G.A. Collins]

Woah, what an analytical response! I too am a huge fan of folklore and pagan beliefs; the world is more beautiful through their eyes. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem, and thank you for writing such a charming review! :)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Excellent rhythm and rhyme, love the imagery. Splendid read and write.

[Jennifer Rai]

Great use of imagery and rhyms. I am a fan of old myths and stories and i can say that your poem has portrayed the faerie dance briliantly.Your poem was blissful and enchanting. I loved it...

[Sugar Plum ♥]

It`s really amazing, enchanting and beautiful poem! I love the story and your perfect lines! Usually fairies are to find in the forest and in the deep nature, where no humans live, to disturb their life...Your poem totally support that. The voice is so gentle and narration so attractive, as if I go to another world...And see this sparkling fairy with my eyes...I just love it! :)

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August-013

[Samuel Jack]

I got so much imagery from this read! I like how it was all pretty at first but then takes on a sinister undertone, at least that's what I got from it.
Favourite line has to be "And the world will grow old in one single night"

Good words.