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A Poem by Geodan
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A poem about elation.

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I was drowning
In the crowd
All of my
Expectations
Were strangling me
But then You came
Now I am free
In the endless sky
I can fly
So fly with me
We can soar
We can live

© 2017 Geodan


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Geodan
This is my first poem on here, what do you think?

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Thank you for entering your poem into my competition!

I am honoured this is your first poem and I had the chance to read it.

The whole thing made me feel happy, elated :) and alive all at once.

Your words reminded me of the song O by Coldplay. Listen to it if ever you get the chance. They are a wonderful band and have often inspired me to write in times when I have felt loss.

I really liked this. Good luck with the rest of your writing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Geodan

6 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on November 26, 2017
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Amarillo , TX



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