From the Sky

Paths cross, but they split later.

She came from the sky
She came down and touched my heart
Now I had to try to fly
It was a whirlwind of emotions
Of love from the start
Once I saw her face
She had my heart
She was a wandering soul
Going from place to place
Nowhere to call home
I opened up my heart
But didn't use my head
She came from the sky
She came down and touched my heart
And now she had to fly

Reviews

[mattavelli]

Hello, Geodan, thank you for entering my contest! :)
The message here is clear, and the thoughts relatable. The phrasing is the shortcoming, in my opinion.

[Geodan]

Thanks for the help! I never really liked the wording of this poem. This review helps.