Long Road

Another nocturnal venture

Long Road

now this long road is a

slow river of quietness...

occasional traffic riles

outward...now under the

night sky a place

to be quiet...

peace to be one with

existence sensing life

beyond what we call

life when all...in

the end...will be well...

George Coombs

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Peace, serenity, being one with the universe- how priceless this experience is , as you so perfectly describe in your excellent poem.”Sensing life beyond what we call life”- yes, exactly so. Transcendence beyond the mortal coil “under the night sky”. Your words and flow and rhythm here are mesmerizing. I feel like I’m standing with you.... thank you George.:)

[George Coombs]

Thankyou so much Annette, sorry to be so long in responding only have been unwell

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

I’m so sorry to hear that George. Hope you are feeling much better now. May God bless you.

[George Coombs]

Thankyou Annette,

[Effie]

Long the road of life and hard. I find your words uplifting with a gentle flow of hope.
"beyond what we call
life when all...in
the end...will be well..."
Faith. My hope. Thank you

[George Coombs]

Thankyou Effie, its good to hear from you again

[Effie]

You are welcome George.

[Great Aunt Astri]

Aw, so well put, so hopeful. I think I will copy this one and keep it in my handbag!

[George Coombs]

I'm honoured to find a place in your handbag, thankyou aunt Astri