Clean Sheets

A snapshot of memory

Clean sheets,

line dried------

Smelling of sunshine

and soft breezes.

Blurry memories

of good times.

 

Clean sheets,

billowing-----

on taut clotheslines.

Soft, green grass

and sunshine.

 

Clean sheets,

gentle background

for a lullaby

Sung by Mother's voice

as she hung

Clean sheets

and laughed.

Reviews

[Miss Coral]

Love this piece- simple statements and simple images, but powerful and easy to relate to. Wonderful word choices as well. :)

This was a winner in the "Inspire Me" contest, though I cannot yet finalize it due to the difficult with finding the button. :)
I have written a poem inspired by this, which will soon be sent to you, with a link to this as the original source of inspiration.

Nicely done, again.

-Coral-

[Skin]

Love the poem's intent love the images it conjures . . . Some thoughts . . .
'Blurry memories' < <

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. that aroma is to die for ... and that laughter ... is all that one needs to live ... beautifully written ... these are amazing images of a shining sun ...