Wednesday

love is always Drifting on my mind

                        Wednesday's Orange sweet

                  sugar coated kisses.

                   

                    Monday's  I don't want

                     to get up.

                   Tuesday we hear the

                    cold  whispers of

                    winds whip

                    through our hair.

                   Thursday's  I  wait

                   for you endlessly.

       

                   Friday's how these

                   words shiver on the

                   lily pads of

                   the lake waters.

                   Saturday just waking

                   up and still breathing

                   life into our lungs.

                    Sunday have you

                    gone and hidden

                    from me.

                     Wednesday's orange

                     kisses of   you.

            

           

Author's Note

I wrote this I think October 14, 2005 I was in the Chiropractic Bathroom was inspired by the orange peach name of the soap HA..HA this is true how I was inspired love is always Drifting on my mind Weather it is Jesus, my husband, or fictional lovers.

Reviews

[NeiL ArandA]

Its amazing you can draw such inspiration from almost anything ordinary . This piece is very beautiful. I'm puzzled about the Sunday . Are you missing something or someone ? I enjoyed this ..

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Really I don't know I could of been thinking of my husband ha...ha I wrote this so long ago don't remember I d fictional love to as I am a hopeless Romantic so mostly it about love But thank you for your Kind words. blessings. kindred poet

[NeiL ArandA]

Love has such been the most muse in poem creation

[MoriartyMesa]

I found this like technicolor, charming and fun.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you for your kind
review and comments
they're appreciated. I must of missed you review I'm sorry. God bless Benita

[Coyote Poetry]

A fun poem to read. I like poetry written free-flowing. Allow us to roam to new places and thoughts. I like the use of color to make your point. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you I thought the Orange would go well with the poem and flow well. thank you again

[Im His Daughter]

lol love it ... this is good

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

thank you sis :)