Heart Shaped Kiss

Not sure what I was thinking when I wrote this...

Your heart blows the

red silken Maple trees  of these,

Sweet kisses I gave you

All wrapped up in red

satin ribbon's

Heart shaped words 

 

Paper kisses blown

into the wind. 

Author's Note

Not sure what was going through my mind when I wrote this... very old poem wrote this. September 21, 2007 I think I was like 28 years old then Lol...

Reviews

[melissa]

This is a beautiful poem keep up the great work i can't wait to read more

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you very much I really Appreciate it. Blessings. Kindred poet

[melissa]

You're welcome

[Bright Ocean Star]

You were probably making paper hearts for your children's valentine's party at school and waxed poetic maybe? I don't know...that's my best guess, but i like it. It is a very sweet, sentimental write. Thank you, dear Spriit!

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

No I wasn't but that is very neat Creativity I did Craft a lot
with my son when he was smaller. Thank you very much I really Appreciate it. Blessings. Kindred poet

[Emily]

You up wrote it on my birthday!! I the way you word it this poem! Well done!

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you very much I really Appreciate it. Ah September 21st mine is March 27th.

Blessings. Kindred poet

[Coyote Poetry]

You were thinking of hopeful and beautiful things. It is a amazing visual poem. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
John/Coyote

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

thank you very much I really Appreciate it. do you have any new pieces ? Blessings. Kindred poet

[Coyote Poetry]

5 new ones I believe. I'm in the writing zone. Took Grandsons to the Chuckie Cheese two times. I wrote poetry and they played.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

What a Beautiful memory I bet they
had fun with Grandpa how sweet of you.

I see how much Joy others
have I will some day when I am
a grandma too but I am happy right
now also not in a hurry.

Ok I will check out your
page and see what you have.

Blessings. kindred poet

[Bluefire]

So pretty, it would be perfect fore Valentine's Day.
Well done. ^^

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

thank you very much I really Appreciate it. I love trees they have some amazing one's
here that I never got to see in Cedar Rapids Iowa my home town get's pretty cold there
and I get ideas from the names of the trees in books Amazing what can
Inspire us when love is on our mind 24/7 yes you're right it would be I have written
many valentine's Day poems for my husband when it
comes around again I will do poems just for that :) Blessings

[Bluefire]

It is strange, isn't it?
For me it's sometimes the names of people or birds, or I'll miss read something and think, "Wow, that's a good idea for a title of a poem or something."
No problem. ^^

[Im His Daughter]

Not sure what you were thinking either, but this does flow & work really well.. I would say Your heart blows through the red silken trees. Blessings sis!

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you again I appreciate it. blessings