Ember rays

was after reading and thinking about love this helped me finish a unfinished poem. written May4,204 at 1:24am the love parts are to do with my husband

Turquoise ember rays

of the sunset glimmers

from your eyes.

The rain dances upon

the colors of the sunrise.

Speak words of love

to me Mon Amour.

Purple blanket of

shimmering morning dew.

Beneath the sliver starlight,

is where our love is.

Songbirds play a melody

upon our hearts.

Fireflies come out

and dance with the

moonlit glowing in the skies.

Author's Note

was after reading and thinking about love this helped me finish a unfinished poem.
written May4,204 at 1:24am the love parts are to do with my husband





MIDNIGHT BLUE LYRICS BY ELO

Reviews

[Skylar Valentine]

A simple yet beautiful write. I liked that the stanza's had a simplistic structure to them that you carried through to the end. Only one thing that really stood out typo wise, "where our* love is" not out* I don't think.

Great images a very summer love feel. Thanks for the pleasing read.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Ah! I would of missed that I thought I put our not out thank you for that.

Thank you for your kind words. Blessings. Kindred poet

[Saddam]

The rain dances upon
the colors of the sunrise.

Quite clear and naturative. Love this dear.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Why Thank you for your kind words. :) hope you're well my friend. Blessings. Benita

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. You took me to good places and thoughts. Thank you dear friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Why Thank you for your kind words. :) Blessings. Benita

[A. Amos]

Beautiful expressions about love, great work my friend...

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Why Thank you for your kind words. :) Blessings. Kindred poet

[melissa]

I love all the poems you sent me i hope you get all of your poems published because I want a copy of them

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you for your kind words. I hope I do too I will let you know when that happens :) Blessings. Kindred poet

[melissa]

You're welcome

[Bluefire]

I love how you painted the ember rays turquoise and the dew purple, the stars silver and added fireflies.
It makes quite a lovely world to live in.
Well done! ^^

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Why Thank you for your kind words. :) Blessings. Kindred poet

[Bluefire]

No problem. ^^

[Simran Kewlani]

Amazing! I love it..... (:

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you for your kind words. Blessings. Kindred poet