Making love in Autumn

Making love in Autumn

A Poem by Benita c Staebelll - KindredPoet
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was Thinking of my husband this was inspired by this Autumn Photo I love Autumn and been listening to Mariah Carey tunes I love her music. Written July 5 2014

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Light the old oil

lamps and chase me

like you always do Baby.



Lets make love out

in this sexy Autumn night.



The stars  twinkle and wink

at how our bodies dance upon

the leafs in this Hot evening.



Cinnamon and Honey so sweet

on the tip of your tongue.



Soft whispers of your voice

says my name upon the wisp

of the wind Oh Baby!



So light those old oil lamps

and chase me through the tall grass

can you catch me baby.



Run with me like carefree innocent

children that's where I'm

at my love join me


Copyright Kindred Poet/ Benita Staebell  McCartney


© 2014 Benita c Staebelll - KindredPoet



Author's Note

Benita c Staebelll - KindredPoet
was Thinking of my husband this was inspired by this Autumn Photo I love Autumn
My husband can't run due to his disability so that was my Imagination :( but it is still love
:) he can Chase me around our bed. Written July 5 2014

Hopeless Romantic what can I say it never left me :)

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Romantic words and imagination make this a splendidly written poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita c Staebelll - KindredPoet

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely review and comment. I really appreciate it.
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A beautiful and hopeful poem for love. I liked it. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry dear friend.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita c Staebelll - KindredPoet

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely review and comment. I really appreciate it.
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Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome Benita. It is my pleasure to read your words.
To love with the affect of our childhood persona.
To chase this love for all our lives...
Beautiful concept.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita c Staebelll - KindredPoet

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely review and comment. I really appreciate it.
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A nice little romantic poem. Very good Visual imagery.
Well written.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita c Staebelll - KindredPoet

3 Years Ago

When I can I will review another one of your poems My sinus have gotten worst they were bad durin.. read more
MAD ENGLISHMAN

3 Years Ago

You just get well.
Best regards.
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FEA
A very pretty love :) is what I see sis:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita c Staebelll - KindredPoet

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely review and comment. I really appreciate it.
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FEA

3 Years Ago

Welcome my sister:)
this was really great!!! romance and autumn = is a great poem, i am a huge fan of autumn!!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Justin

3 Years Ago

your welcome, that is awesome how we have the same name, keep up your hard work on your poems and i .. read more
Benita c Staebelll - KindredPoet

3 Years Ago

I will thank you :)
Justin

3 Years Ago

your welcome friend :) we are both awesome writers
I'm loving this poem- im a HUGE fan of romance and autumn so this was a complete go for me! :) Beautiful piece of work, I LOVED it :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita c Staebelll - KindredPoet

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely review and comment. I really appreciate it.
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sounds like a sweet and fun romantic time ..charming write, so well expressed

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita c Staebelll - KindredPoet

3 Years Ago

Thank you my friend for your lovely review and comment. I really appreciate it.
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i love autumn as well . it s nice lovely imaginery what i find here. i wish nice chase .

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita c Staebelll - KindredPoet

3 Years Ago

Thank you my friend for your lovely review and comment. I really appreciate it.
making love i.. read more

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