Scribbling down a love letter

I don't know just thoughts dancing in my head don't know I've been listening to Natasha Bedingfield songs- Put your arms around me and unwritten and others. Written July 7 2014

I spilt coffee on this

love letter I was scribbling

down for you,

Like Shakespeare

writing love upon these

rose petals of my heart.

I could sit and read

his love stories for ever

takes you to a different land

of love.

I sit upon this window sill

your name upon the tip of

my tongue  like a strong cup

of coffee  with creamer,

That's just how I drink

my morning coffee good to 

the last drop.

These words are like wet

rain drops dripping from the

soft rose petals of my silk covered Heart.

So I sit and muse upon

these words like a love story. 

Copyright Kindred poet/ Benita Staebell McCartney

Author's Note

I was Drinking Coffee when I wrote this also
I don't know just thoughts dancing in my head don't know
I've been listening to Natasha Bedingfield songs- Put your arms around me and
unwritten and others. Written July 7 2014

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"These words are like wet
rain drops dripping from the
soft rose petals of my silk covered Heart"
I enjoyed your thoughts and the beautiful poetry. The above lines were my favorite. When the heart is silky and warm. There are great possibilities. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you I was drinking coffee when this came to me and was listening to Natasha Bedingfield songs- Put your arms around me at the time. so thoughts just kind of came out of no where love is always on my mind the life of a hopeless romantic. thank you for your kind review and comments. I really appreciate it. blessings. kindred poet

[Bluefire]

I love Natasha's song, "Pocketful Of Sunshine" it's so nice. ^^
This is gorgeous. It has to be one of my favorites of yours and for some reason it reminded me of a song, let me see if I can find it... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jHEj4cRhm3E
Anywho, very well played. ^^

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you I was drinking coffee when this came to me and was listening to Natasha Bedingfield songs- Put your arms around me at the time. so thoughts just kind of came out of no where love is always on my mind the life of a hopeless romantic. thank you for your kind review and comments. I really appreciate it. blessings. kindred poet

[Bluefire]

You're welcome. ^^
Naasha Bedingfield + coffee = awesomeness.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

HA...HA thank you :)

[Fran Marie]

your name upon the tip of
my tongue like a strong cup
of coffee with creamer,

oh this piece is good to the last word...quite lovely indeed and so well penned

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you I was drinking coffee when this came to me and was listening to Natasha Bedingfield songs- Put your arms around me at the time. so thoughts just kind of came out of no where love is always on my mind the life of a hopeless romantic. thank you for your kind review and comments. I really appreciate it. blessings. kindred poet

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Develops quite naturally in the lines ---
Did you intend to use:

Like shake spear
writing love upon these
rose petals of my heart.
----
Like Shakespeare
writing love upon these
rose petals of my heart.

or was that as you wrote it...KP

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

That was as I wrote it on here didn't see the e on the end of Shake Spear as I didn't write it that way in my note book sorry LOL... thank you for pointing that out I will defiantly fix that typo I may of been typing that too fast and didn't notice it. thank you for your lovely review and comment. I really appreciate it. blessings. kindred poet

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I said that Backwards but I left the e off of Shakespeare thank you :) I fixed it

[Chidoriflower]

Truly lovely. Reminds me of milk chocolate and coffee, thinking of your lover and your favorite things. Relaxing, really. Lovely!!!~ :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you I was drinking coffee when this came to me and was listening to Natasha Bedingfield songs- Put your arms around me at the time. so thoughts just kind of came out of no where love is always on my mind the life of a hopeless romantic. thank you for your kind review and comments. I really appreciate it. blessings. kindred poet

[Chidoriflower]

heh You're very welcome