Bitter taste in my mouth

Bitter taste in my mouth

A Poem by Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet
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Inspired by this song Remedy by Little Boots she is also a DJ and she sings written July 15 2014. I love Techno and DJ tunes. my first high school crush was a DJ those where good times :)

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You leave this bitter

taste in my mouth.


Like a poisonous dart

so you  think you've

won this fight.


Bad taste on my

tongue you're deceit.



you will not tempt me

with your cruel games

you play.



Toxic words will not

paralyze me to where

I'm helpless.



You spit venom from

your mouth like a hissing

snake.


You leave this bitter

bad taste upon my lips.


I will not play in the

Devils playground.



It is like kissing

a poisonous  ash tray.



Copyright Kindred poet/ Benita Staebell McCartney

© 2014 Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet


Author's Note

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet
Inspired by this song Remedy by Little Boots she is also a DJ and she sings
my first high school crush was a DJ but he wasn't what I thought he'd be he was full of himself poplar loved attention but not all DJs
are like that so I have a for DJs and Musicians and tall and dark and handsome guys
with accent and mellow voice I guess that is why my husband is tall and dark and those
gray blue eyes killer and that Mellow deep calm voice but his Temper yicks I wish he was calm like me. so that is a little about me I think DJs And Nerds smart Guys and Musicians are sexy and my husband is a smart guy I feel in love with his Brains LOL...


Little Boots - Remedy (Video )




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Benita, I enjoyed this poem full of venom, it's good to read a darker one, just now.... and thank you for posting the music with it, I can feel the vibe. It brings, that exact feeling with the lyrics, to not be dependent on someone or something that destroys... well written.

-Elisa

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

Thank you I really Appreciate your kind review and comments. I love music like this and music all ki.. read more



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Toxic words will not

paralyze me to where

I'm helpless.

#Wow! What a beautiful line ! Worth contemplation :)
Forgive whoever has done this, and don't bother, dear xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

Kindred means Family Kin I am a poet. some call me Benita or from the nick name KP or Kindred spir.. read more
Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

Hahahaha aw... How lovely to know more about that :)
have a nice day, Benita 😄
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

same to you thank you :)
Wow, this is sooooo different from my happy, bubbly, romantic KindredPoet.
But I love it, it's kind of a sexy sting!

Great one!

: )

Posted 9 Years Ago


Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

Well the song MS Little Boots did is very Inspiring Music is great like that I love it.Thank you I r.. read more
You have a great style of writing. Great diction with a powerful delivery of your words. Well done!


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

Thank you I really Appreciate your kind review and comments. I love music like this and music all ki.. read more
Benita, I enjoyed this poem full of venom, it's good to read a darker one, just now.... and thank you for posting the music with it, I can feel the vibe. It brings, that exact feeling with the lyrics, to not be dependent on someone or something that destroys... well written.

-Elisa

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

Thank you I really Appreciate your kind review and comments. I love music like this and music all ki.. read more
I will not play in the Devils playground.
I loved it Sis and feel you made a great view point what you wont put up with.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

Thank you I really Appreciate your kind review and comments. I love music like this and music all ki.. read more
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9 Years Ago

Welcome That's pretty cool:)))))))))))))) yeppy sure did:)
I like the theme of this poem. Sometimes i get inspiration from song too. Well written keep it up

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

Thank you I really Appreciate your kind review and comments. I love music like this and music all ki.. read more

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Added on July 16, 2014
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Tags: Bitter Taste, Techon, poem, you won't deceive with your lies

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