My imagination of what autumn would be

I love Autumn,What would you imagine if you could eat the colors of the autumn leafs. written July 26 2014

Golden caramel yellow

drips from fall leafs.

Chocolate brown fudge

leafs is this a dream like

the chocolate factory.

Orange cream soda leafs

why can't this be real but

imagination is real.

Soft silk red cherry pie

leafs how sweet does Autumn

taste to you.

Wouldn't it be nice if leafs

could taste like strawberry short cake

dressed in silk Dark chocolate sauce.

My dream of what Autumn colors

would be like candy.

copyright  Kindred poet/ Benita Staebell McCartney

Author's Note

I love Autumn. written July 26 2014

What would you imagine if
you could eat the colors of the autumn leafs.

Reviews

[Bluefire]

I dunno about this. If it were true, I'd want to eat the leaves every year, but that's not the problem.
Once the leaves fall in fall, the cats of the neighborhood like to use them as a litter box. . . Cat poo can be easily mistaken for chocolate syrup.
Anywho, I like the idea of this and how you turned cold, crisp autumn into something warm and sweet.
Well done. ^^

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

LOL... well you could smell it before you consume it LOL... I'm glad you liked it.Thank you for the review and comments. I really appreciate it. Blessings. Benita/ Kindred poet

[Bluefire]

That's a great idea! =o
You're welcome!

[Realm of Thoughts]

Wow. Like you I like Autumn too as summer is the worst time at the place where I live. Not only that Autumn is totally a different face of nature and of course its very romantic. Well, not with strawberry that much but always do I go for Chocolates. Nice poem once again. :) Blessings.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for the review and comments. I really appreciate it. Blessings. Benita/ Kindred poet

[Matching Socks]

Sort of sad that summer is ending but I do also love autumn.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

It gets way too hot and humid here so yes I like calm weather where it isn't over heated or freezing cold Autumn is a favorite time of the year and I love spring 2 calming seasons. thank you for the review and comments. I really appreciate it. Blessings. Benita/ Kindred poet

[Matching Socks]

You're welcome Benita!!

[Alfred Kukitz]

Careful Benita I have diabetes but I love it all the same!

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

If only it could be like Charlie and the Chocolate Factory. Glad you liked it. ah well it is only real if you want it to be. Thank you for your kind review and comments. I really appreciate it. Blessings. Benita/ Kindred poet

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it is my favorite season also...and you give us not just a visual of it, but a scrumptious taste...also.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you I am pleased that you liked it. Thank you for your kind review and comments. I really appreciate it. strawberry short cake is a favorite of mine my mom used to make it for me but she never liked it kind of makes you hungry reading this LOL. Blessings. Benita/ Kindred poet

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

My favorite think about autumn is all the beautiful colors of the leaves… what a scruptious way to describe this delightful season.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you I am pleased that you liked it. Thank you for your lovely review and comments. I really appreciate it. strawberry short cake is a favorite of mine my mom used to make it for me but she never liked it kind of makes you hungry reading this LOL. Blessings. Benita/ Kindred poet

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Always a pleasure my friend.