Love is

Written Jan. 30,2015 Love is musing on love!

Love is

Love is walking
on the clouds,

Kissing your
I love yous.

Walking hand in hand
with you Mon Amour,

Touching the wet sand
with our toes.

I want to catch the waves
with you before they run away.

Love is a racing heart
when your eyes meet
for the first time.

I want the sun to kiss
my skin in the summer
day as it always has.

Lets kiss the ocean
sands with our feet
then dip our toes in the waters.

Love is a passionate fire
that burns in your soul for
that love it is the color of
wild sunsets.

Love is you the soft
breath the I love yous.

© 2014 Benita Staebell McCartney

 

Author's Note

Was listening to Spanish music
and reading a
poem of Albert Alexander Bukoski
called Through the ocean and it inspired this
piece and I was musing upon love which love
is on my mind 24/7 I am a hopeless romantic

Just written Jan. 30, 2015 Friday a new poem hope
you like. write on my poet friends.

Reviews

[alf]

Hi Benita. After reading other pieces you have read, I know you are heading in the right direction with you romantic poems. This is lovely, soft and tender, music to the ears as it is read aloud. Keep writing, for each is an improvement on the previous!!! alf

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you for your kind review
and comments they're appreciated I've been writing since I was 7 years old.
God bless. Benita

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a really nice love poem...i like "kissing the i love you's"
lots of passion in this...in the emotional sense.
jacob

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you Pleased that you liked it. your review and comments are appreciated.
I just wrote this it is very new most days it is all I think about keeps me happy :). God bless. Benita

[wordman]

a beautiful love story,enjoyed the read

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you Pleased that you liked it. your review and comments are appreciated.
I just wrote this it is very new most days it is all I think about keeps me happy :). God bless. Benita

[wordman]

you are welcome