Mirror Me

Mirror Me

A Poem by Gillzy
"

Are we reflecting each other?

"

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Look in the mirror.

Scattered images              fly.

Happy times.

Sad.

Happy

And sad.

Brow is creased,

To touch                             it's real.

The scowl in the eyes

Is distant and present.

Want to ignore

To forget -                    Let go.

But can't.

 

Look in the mirror.

Look in the eyes.

Yours to mine.

Mine to yours.

Is it mutual?

Both cores at war.

We are as one                      - reflecting.

 

Look in the mirror.

Can it be broken?

If it breaks is it fixed,

Is it over,

Is it gone?

 


© 2008 Gillzy



Author's Note

Gillzy
I didn't know how to finish it, so I just left it :-/

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I'm tempted to change a wee bit:

"We are as one -reflecting
-deflecting"

Maybe...

Posted 9 Years Ago


I think the ending is fine. Great write. Powerful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Gillzy
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