Let The Rain Cry.

Let The Rain Cry.

A Poem by Gillzy

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Does a sob sob if there's no one near to hear it?
Any point in letting emotions all set loose?
For me, deep down, the melancholic sadness
Is something that no longer wishes to be free.

Sometimes I'll get angry
And let out a scream.
Or upset and release a sigh.
I want to shout from the roof tops
When I get mad.
I'd rather howl a flood
Everytime I am sad.

Stop all the nonsense, and childish ways,
Look at good things, the way things could be.
Just get some perspective and look on the whole.
I'll think I'll let the rain do all my crying for me.

 


© 2008 Gillzy



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This is a unique writing style. I understand the point you are getting across. Just have to say that there is no reason to allow emotions to be bottled up inside.. Let them loose, even if there is not a soul to hear but yourself. It always helps to have the rain cry with you if you need to shed a few tears though. Less lonely that way.

Interesting point of view.. nice write. ;p

Posted 9 Years Ago


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I love this. we seem to be on the same page today, relating natures tears to our own suffering, please come read my The Playground and you will see what I mean. loved this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a unique writing style. I understand the point you are getting across. Just have to say that there is no reason to allow emotions to be bottled up inside.. Let them loose, even if there is not a soul to hear but yourself. It always helps to have the rain cry with you if you need to shed a few tears though. Less lonely that way.

Interesting point of view.. nice write. ;p

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Gillzy
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