Flatline

Flatline

A Poem by Gina
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Just a poem...Spilled my thoughts.

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Flatline.

One word that means so much to me.

It doesn’t mean the same thing to a lot of people.

It is an absolute ending… A guarantee.

To some, it’s evil. But to me, it’s extremely peaceful.

It’s all the freedom I could ever want.

For an inexplicable reason, it doesn't haunt.


Life out of control.

It’s about to explode and I,

Feel like letting go

Like an overdose of guilt

But death means no tomorrow

It is final.

I don’t apologize for these words… so suicidal

I’m done with “survival”.

I’m done with useless coping techniques.

I’m done with millions of tweaks.

Here and there.

I’m freaking everywhere

Because that’s what a messed up brain feels like

And yes it must be childlike, but


It’s so absurd.

Feeling unheard and

The world around me is all blurred.

Everything is slow and I’m too fast.

I know it isn’t real but it’s a time draft, in my mind.

I’m fine with being left behind.


It goes up…

It goes down…

It was a setup and a

nervous breakdown.

So here it is,

It all started with an, “I’m fine,” a rookie mistake.

Now, a flatline, consequence of a heartache.

© 2017 Gina


Author's Note

Gina
For those who understand, I'm sorry...

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Critique: (For a inexplicable reason, it doesn't haunt.) For an - listen to the beginning sound of the word following the indefinite articles a and an. If it sounds like a consonant, use a, if it sounds like a vowel, use an.
(I goes down…) It goes down?

Review: being a sexagenarian myself and having a minor medical background I am oh to familiar with the topic from both sides you could say. Your poem is well thought out and intelligently written, you have used just enough emotion to make your point and a philosophy that offers enlightenment if not hope to those who haven't been there. Bravo! I give it five out of five Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gina

7 Years Ago

I found this constructive! I did not even notice those silly mistakes! Thank you for pointing them o.. read more
Bear

7 Years Ago

there is a trick I use that you may find helpful. I use a text to speech program to listen to my wor.. read more


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the most important thing is to realize...and accept it...very few in this world have this ability.. thank you for sharing such and important sentiment in human nature..

Posted 7 Years Ago


This was really painful to read. But you built up the emotions like it is.
It's hard to imagine the consequences which bring people to end their lives in this way.
Well penned.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

And mine too 😊 I'm a geek when it comes to reading 😂😛
Gina

7 Years Ago

Hahahaha so am I!!
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

Reading is what makes a writer 😉😉😊
Critique: (For a inexplicable reason, it doesn't haunt.) For an - listen to the beginning sound of the word following the indefinite articles a and an. If it sounds like a consonant, use a, if it sounds like a vowel, use an.
(I goes down…) It goes down?

Review: being a sexagenarian myself and having a minor medical background I am oh to familiar with the topic from both sides you could say. Your poem is well thought out and intelligently written, you have used just enough emotion to make your point and a philosophy that offers enlightenment if not hope to those who haven't been there. Bravo! I give it five out of five Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gina

7 Years Ago

I found this constructive! I did not even notice those silly mistakes! Thank you for pointing them o.. read more
Bear

7 Years Ago

there is a trick I use that you may find helpful. I use a text to speech program to listen to my wor.. read more
Wow this is amazing... So compelling and emotional... I've seen it happen... You're an amazing writer! You are really capable of making the reader feel so emotional and understanding. Keep it up Gina keep it up...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Gina

7 Years Ago

This means so much to mean. You don't even know. In the moment when I am writing I am thinking about.. read more
Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

No problem Gina :=
Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

:) keep on writing

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Added on March 19, 2017
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Tags: depression, death

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Gina
Gina

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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