A Smile

This poem was based off a feeling I had when I thought of the special person in my life.

Just the sight of you
Brings a smile
To the surface
 
A smile that is
Too hidden
For anyone to see
 
You bring it forward
And put it on display
For everyone to see
 
Just a simple look
A little hug from you
Reveals a smile
 
The spirit soars
Whenever you are near
The smile comes forward

Reviews

[InsanityWriter]

I love the last stanza. :) Very sweet. ^_^

[Calibaster]

That is a very good poem! I like it!:) Keep up the good work!

[RavenWells]

This poem is very relatable, I enjoyed reading it. The only suggestion I have is to put in some punctuation. It would make the piece a little to understand. Nice job :)