Thousand Suns With No Light

Your hand prints all over my heart

Tears falling in broken parts

Shattered and broken I can't find the start

As I gaze at pieces of me fade away with dust in the wind

Every beginning has an end so this end finally begins

What becomes of a lonely heart on a lonely road

Screaming voices in me yearning to explode

Looking for another straying boat to board

Just to be forgotten again as I blend in the crowd

I am not lonely, I am not lonely, I am just empty

I am not sad, I am not sad, I am swimming in envy

I get out of my shell for anyone to see me plainly

But instead I become transparent and fading

I slowly retire to the silent corner of my room

Tears scratching my cheeks as i fold in my misery cocoon

There is a dark heavy storm invading my mind

Death biting his finger-nails relentlessly staring at time

Angels passed out from the celebration wine

Waiting for my hero who is stuck on the aisle

I am yearning to see stars in a sunny morning

I am wishing on a broken star to heal my broken heart

I am looking for a friend who wont alight at the next bend

I am just trying to find happiness in my depths of misery

Yes I am the silent smile in the familiar crowd

The loneliest among friends

I am the coin you didn't toss in the well

The one you believe can't make your wish come true

I am the sun that got lazy to rise

So it rained and I got cursed

I am surrounded with a thousand suns, with no light

I am surrounded with a thousand happy faces, with no smiles

I am surrounded with dozens of mannequin friends, yet all alive

Really, never mind my presence until the next time you are lonely 

♥ GG

Reviews

[R.O.M.E.T.S.I.]

I love how every line is achingly beautiful, which not all poets can manage. The metephors and words you use.... absolutly brilliant. :)

[GunMetal]

"Tears scratching my cheeks" Nice.
I like some of your metaphors here, like "Angels passed out from the celebration wine." Wicked image. This poem was really good.

[G!o]

Thanks....

[Btwixer]

I am the sun that got lazy to rise
So it rained and I got cursed

I really like this part, i can feel the emotions come out. Awesome write

[MOON]

Poignant , beautiful write about loneliness.

[Leslie Philibert]

This is a very good poem with a lot of fine lines, a sad poem that captures a lot of beauty through some fine writing, and a very honest, truthful piece of writing.

[Stormy Weather]

This is so wonderful! My favorite lines were,
"I am not lonely, I am not lonely, I am just empty
I am not sad, I am not sad, I am swimming in envy."
Gaaahh, that's so brilliant! Great poem :}