Details

Details

A Poem by Gio S.P.
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A poem written in a story-like format about seeing the details in somebody special.

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I never realized how important the details were. Body upon
body, the warmth of an unfamiliar along bed sheets enriched
with the history of one; whose lips ended at a slight curve,
whose eyes were a sea of green only comparable to the
richest of emeralds, but she did not come with a price-tag.
The details are always priceless. Goosebumps by the hundreds
along a spine so thick, it's no wonder she held her head so high.
Skin pale with little lightning bolts of blue pumping fire into her.
And when you look at her - through her - through the wholeness
of her and into the stardust that made her - you'll burn into her
like moths to flames.


© 2015 Gio S.P.



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Very great poem a don't like poems so much but this was the best a read please read my 2 story and let me now wat you think good or bad

Posted 2 Years Ago


VERY nice! This whole poem seems so, so zoomed in, giving us readers a clear view of all the details you see. I particularly liked "little lightning bolts of blue pumping fire into her". Great work, Gio!

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Gio S.P.

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the sincerity and heartfelt review! I'm a man of great detail and will continu.. read more
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Beautiful and soft tones of love sprinkled with stardust of the emerald enchantress. I enjoyed the passion and the sincerity. :D

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Gio S.P.

2 Years Ago

Your kind words are sincerely appreciated and cherished. I'm really glad that you enjoyed my writing.. read more

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Gio S.P.
Gio S.P.

New York, NY



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My name is Gio S.P. and I'm a writer and a poet, looking to be published. I'm 23 years old, currently residing in New York City, have an affinity for nature and am a father to three cats. If you wi.. more..

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