Details

A poem written in a story-like format about seeing the details in somebody special.

I never realized how important the details were. Body upon

body, the warmth of an unfamiliar along bed sheets enriched

with the history of one; whose lips ended at a slight curve,

whose eyes were a sea of green only comparable to the

richest of emeralds, but she did not come with a price-tag.

The details are always priceless. Goosebumps by the hundreds

along a spine so thick, it's no wonder she held her head so high.

Skin pale with little lightning bolts of blue pumping fire into her.

And when you look at her - through her - through the wholeness

of her and into the stardust that made her - you'll burn into her

like moths to flames.

Reviews

[andre8664]

Very great poem a don't like poems so much but this was the best a read please read my 2 story and let me now wat you think good or bad

[Tom McRoberts]

VERY nice! This whole poem seems so, so zoomed in, giving us readers a clear view of all the details you see. I particularly liked "little lightning bolts of blue pumping fire into her". Great work, Gio!

[Gio S.P.]

Thank you so much for the sincerity and heartfelt review! I'm a man of great detail and will continue to deliver such writing. Thank you again!

[~]

Beautiful and soft tones of love sprinkled with stardust of the emerald enchantress. I enjoyed the passion and the sincerity. :D

[Gio S.P.]

Your kind words are sincerely appreciated and cherished. I'm really glad that you enjoyed my writing! Thank you :)