My dog can't...

My dog can't...

A Poem by Tom
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All dogs are unique & amazing!

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My dog can’t fetch a ball, like the able retriever

in throw, chase and return, he is not a firm believer

My dog can’t round-up and herd, like the competent collie

for he told me once that chasing sheep, was the height of pure folly

My dog can’t growl and bark aloud, like a german shepherd

he’s more of a stealth prowler, as is a stalking leopard


My dog can’t smell the fox, superbly like the hound

he prefers to let his canine brother, remain safe below the ground

My dog can’t scare a prowler, like the powerful rottweiler

but I know he would try his best, despite being a tiny fella

My dog can’t wear the mascot's cloak, like the wolfhound Irish

he prefers to stay at home, content within his own parish


My dog can’t see acutely, like the graceful, roaming afghan

but when the sausages are cooking, he keeps a firm eye on the pan

My dog can’t make himself look tough, like the British bull dog

then he was not bred to bring down bovine, or ill-tempered hog

My dog can’t do the above tasks as well, like the breeds I’ve named above

For he’s just a little shih-tzu but his heart for me is full of Love!

© 2014 Tom


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The dog, man’s best friend, they love you no matter what! Always glad to see you and treat you like a long lost friend. You are right, it matters not what they can do, it is all about the love. Enjoyable poem, very well done. Made me think of my dogs, past and present, with a smile.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Tom

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Giuseppe



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I found this adorable :3 I really enjoyed it c:

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

9 Years Ago

Thank you Chloe !
And that last, lovely line, is all that matters.

Left this poem feeling happy.

Beccy.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

9 Years Ago

Thank you kindly Beccy !
Hahaha quite hilarious and endearing! I love dogs so much and I can see here perfectly well that although there are lots of things your dog can't do, you still love him. This is an interesting piece, Tom. I sure like it a lot. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

10 Years Ago

Thank you kindly Blue !
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....so sweet....no dog lover could dislike this piece. Flowy and catchy, I believe mentally I read it in a sing-song voice. It's nice to see some light-hearted poetry

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

10 Years Ago

Thank you kindly Cleide & nice to see it from that angle as well !
Cleide Tatyana Almeida

10 Years Ago

most welcome. keep writing
He's doing more than enough to earn his keep, Tom, and I'm sure you agree. I really enjoyed your poem. Your dog is worth his weight in gold.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

10 Years Ago

He is and more Joyce and thank you!
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Dye
What a truly genuine love poem LOL To think it only took a coffee break to come up with. No matter the size, your dogs give you the most important thing, his heart full of love. So incredibly sweet.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

10 Years Ago

You've caught the drift Dye and thank you for commenting!
Brought a grin to my face.What he/she lacks in size etc. makes up for just being itself that is a shih-tzu

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

10 Years Ago

Ah thank you so much minisla !
Ahhhh. He's a cuddly one I bet. Very amusing one, here.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

10 Years Ago

Merci much Pryde
Very cute, just like a shih-tzu...like how you pen'd other breeds and their signatures into this one too.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Ha so you didn't age for an entire year, I wanna try! haha
Tom

9 Years Ago

You don't need to do that Frieda, forever young & beautiful !
Frieda P

9 Years Ago

That's what we all think, I see the lines creeping in around the eyes...but thanks I love ya coach!
Absolutely adorable! :) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Tom

10 Years Ago

Thank you Julie

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