LUNA & THE RA: COLLECTION OF VERSES ~ SHADOWS HIT ILLUMINATION

LUNA & THE RA: COLLECTION OF VERSES ~ SHADOWS HIT ILLUMINATION

A Book by Glen Yumang Manese
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Next in line to be published after: The Onyx - Vena Amoris

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Chapters


© 2016 Glen Yumang Manese



Author's Note

Glen Yumang Manese
Please note, you do not have to leave a comment, but are welcome to do so if you wish. Just editing through my work here. This will be my next book. I will post only 40 verses.

I am in search for the Cover of the Book. I hope to get underway with this one in 2016.

Follow me at Twitter tag: @glenyumangmanes
E-mail: glenyumangmanese@yahoo.com

Excerpts from my comments on reviews from fellow writes here at Writers Cafe:

Celestial is just on this planet Earth. If I find her is in the outer realm. I might not live to enjoy her presence. I have been married and now remarried for 2 years. "Luna & the Ra" is about a muse. Look carefully into my writings here and some in "The Onyx - Vena Amoris". The verses are not just to enlighten the mind, but give even more within the verse a cryptic message. The "Muse" is in the verse. I do not use the words "it" / "itself" in any of my writings. Including my novel, makes me challenge my mind and pour out from within. This has developed me to change and form like a phoenix.

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I started your collection of poetry and have enjoyed it, will continue to read over time.
I find it to be very inspirational and thought provoking, will definitely buy your book when it's released.
Your author's note speaks volumes about you as an artist, and I love the reference to the phoenix.
Well done my friend, i'm looking forward to reading much more.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glen Yumang Manese

4 Years Ago

Traci - thanks for your time and review...this is the continuation...after the book: The Onyx - Vena.. read more



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Dye
4am is my favorite- perhaps because it is a very familiar hour for me :)

"Life with you is never bleak a situation.
Lying next to priceless tells me travel is tiring.
Time controls not a measure of distance in our meeting.
Fifteen years have succumb to finding life has come full circle.
Where travel is not just a destination, but enroot to living."



Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glen Yumang Manese

4 Years Ago

DS- Thanks for your time to read my work... I will agree with you... inside joke... they would have .. read more
Dye

4 Years Ago

Very sweet :)
In reading your work of art, I find you searching for love and your existence through a celestial journey... this is intriguing and perpetuates hope in finding your way, at times giving in to fate.

A well done, collage of poems. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glen Yumang Manese

4 Years Ago

Robbie - celestial is just on this planet Earth... If I find her in the outer realm I might not live.. read more
Robbie~xoxo~

4 Years Ago

wow! I love the "phoenix" concept... beautiful...
the muse is now legendary, etched in the ve.. read more
this is very profound to the point I enjoyed the energy in it

ron

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glen Yumang Manese

4 Years Ago

Ron - thanks for your time... to comment on my work... I hope to release this one in late 2013 for p.. read more
There were alot of spectacular lines that I thought worked nicely. Though I would suggest working on your structure a bit more. It's all the same and becomes repetitive, the tone sometimes varieys but the flow seems to stay the same. You can fix this by experimenting with structuring and line division.Other than that, well done. :D

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glen Yumang Manese

4 Years Ago

I'm going to just do that for aesthetics in the second wave of the book: The Onyx - Vena Amoris... I.. read more
Beckie D

4 Years Ago

I've just started reading your work, and man you are really good. You are so professional.
read more
Glen Yumang Manese

4 Years Ago

I see you wrote on Vile's comments...hehehe...thanks for your time...and take your time...I just put.. read more
There are umpteen lines and then more, to simply take my breath away....

"death is just a brief corridor to free soul"

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"How much must a man bleed?
How many births created?
Does this existence carry through the cycle?
In continuing is the everlasting corridor of life

I could go on...but I just want to convey my appreciation of your keen poetic mind and your vast and totally incredible collection of imagery and words. This is a very fabulous collection. My heartiest compliments Glen.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such beautiful words! I really enjoyed Balance. You have a wonderful gift with words.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glen Yumang Manese

4 Years Ago

Thanks... Sunni.... I did "Balance" with a few notable words to give the verse... character with the.. read more
Sunni Davis

4 Years Ago

The result is very well done. Its wonderfully brilliant.
Wow - I am in awe! The length doesn't make this difficult at all - sheer pleasure to read! Am still breathing between the lines....beautiful work!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glen Yumang Manese

4 Years Ago

Poppy - Thanks for the review... I believe this collection shows more... in how I've developed from .. read more
Poppy Ruth Silver

4 Years Ago

Wonderful! :)
Destination:

"Distance between both of us.
Destination is at eye’s view to emerge."

Distance really creates a problem in a couple. It can make you sick. And the only remedy is to be with the one you love...your destiny.

Nice one.

I just being caught by the heaviness of this page because of many poems compiled. Lol. As a reviewer, I have to search for the poem of my choice. You can already make this a book, wherein every poem is a chapter...so that each poem could be viewed/reviewed specifically... like what we have done in our collections. That's only a suggestion, Glen. The final decision is still yours.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glen Yumang Manese

4 Years Ago

Thanks for the proposal... I just put them this way to better edit them with my master document... w.. read more


"Apparition

I believe you.
Write from the heart.
At times, solemn as a silent apparition does.
I’m there lying next to you.
Comfort exhales to surrender.
A shield is impenetrable like immortality.
We live in a transparent world of glass."

I liked this poem, the images and sentiment.

Favorite line:

"A shield is impenetrable like immortality."



Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glen Yumang Manese

4 Years Ago

I wrote this with the intent of catching the catch phrase starting lines:

I believe you.. read more
I was almost discourage to read your poem because i find it too long then i realized that it was a poem compilation. out of these poems, i find the ANOMALY most appealing. The use of the chess pieces is truly brilliant.

P.S. i hope that you could put the poems in separate pages. This is just a suggestion so that reading and commenting will be a lot more easier for readers.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

gabrielle

4 Years Ago

*each poem in separate page
Glen Yumang Manese

4 Years Ago

I group them this way so I can read over... as a writer... I find posting them individually daunting.. read more

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Me in a nutshell: I am currently, done with my first book of verses: The Onyx - Vena Amoris. Friesen Press finished in December and is out for release before the holidays at the end of the year 20.. more..

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