Verse 2:  Bipolar

Verse 2: Bipolar

A Chapter by Glen Yumang Manese



Bipolar

 

Believe madness is retribution to mental stability.

Understanding my disorder is a two-edged sword.

Replaced by is an axis of complete unknowns.




© 2016 Glen Yumang Manese



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You've expressed the caprice of unknowable emotions quite well, and very simply.
I particularly like how you express that bpd is a double-edged sword, capable of hurting both yourself and others, even if it wasn't intentional. Well done, softly spoken, and simply portrayed.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your time and review...and your interpretation of this verse...
DIVYA

3 Years Ago

You are most welcome. I always admire your impressive collection of work and hope to keep reading mo.. read more



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that first line is amazing. that's exactly what it's like.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Awesome. This disorder spans two universes the variables of which are totally unknown but sometimes prone to great genius and creativity... Very Interesting.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

Trice...thanks for the time and comment...
You've written this disorder greatly out, with all it's duality.

-Elisa

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

Just for my older sister...a few writings are done for her...especially --- the E-magazine --- Banan.. read more

3 Years Ago

You are welcome Glen, always, I will ponder my thoughts within time over all of your work, :)
I like description in the chapter. I like how you defined the mental stability. You said a lot using so few words.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

Coyote --- thx for the review and your time...
Perfectly descriptive passage into those unknown emotions.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

Don't threaten me...cyborg...I knew you' weren't human...secret is out now...hehehe...
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Big mouth....
Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

Catch you in the morning...late here and time for some R&R...later...
Balance needs imbalance in an imperfect world. Everything is unknown in the end. Enjoyed this.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

G Von Ché --- again thanks for your time and reply to my work...there cannot be one without the oth.. read more
Unknowns, indeed. And very much so a two edged sword. Heartfelt look into a deep dark reality.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

I'm happy to see this get reviews...in part for my sister and in turn for my work...thanks...
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FEA
Again another deep setting here, I love the 2 edge sword effect:))))))))))))))))))))

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

FEA

3 Years Ago

I know a lot suffer with it and wow its pretty bad but newer meds have came out to really treat it. .. read more
Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

I believe they are over medicated myself...but having seen my sister with the problem since --- as f.. read more
FEA

3 Years Ago

wow sad but true!
You've expressed the caprice of unknowable emotions quite well, and very simply.
I particularly like how you express that bpd is a double-edged sword, capable of hurting both yourself and others, even if it wasn't intentional. Well done, softly spoken, and simply portrayed.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your time and review...and your interpretation of this verse...
DIVYA

3 Years Ago

You are most welcome. I always admire your impressive collection of work and hope to keep reading mo.. read more

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