Verse 2:  Bipolar

Verse 2: Bipolar

A Chapter by Glen Yumang Manese



Bipolar

 

Believe madness is retribution to mental stability.

Understanding my disorder is a two-edged sword.

Replaced by is an axis of complete unknowns.




© 2016 Glen Yumang Manese



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You've expressed the caprice of unknowable emotions quite well, and very simply.
I particularly like how you express that bpd is a double-edged sword, capable of hurting both yourself and others, even if it wasn't intentional. Well done, softly spoken, and simply portrayed.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your time and review...and your interpretation of this verse...
DIVYA

3 Years Ago

You are most welcome. I always admire your impressive collection of work and hope to keep reading mo.. read more



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I am mad as the monster may - be
dual face, nameless, restless might - be
madness is normal in our penned-up world
In my creation, I am the master or their lord
creator of words.

Bipolar is a Circular matter
Like a double-edge behind the mirror
The mind is in chaotic interior.

- faceless being



Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

Faceless Being - I like your lines up top...I believe we all have a bit of bipolar in all of us...I'.. read more
Faceless Poet

3 Years Ago

ahh, I know right, just like my outside is up-tight
yet my mind is really all out, out-right.<.. read more
A creative and beautiful way to portray bipolar disorder. Thoroughly enjoyed!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

Your time and review is noted...thanks for reading...this one...I wrote this for my older sister...

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Me in a nutshell: I am currently, done with my first book of verses: The Onyx - Vena Amoris. Friesen Press finished in December and is out for release before the holidays at the end of the year 20.. more..

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